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拉拉 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

英文的作文〈不用太長〉

前面我有打一些 後面接不下去 請幫忙

After they want the treasure hunt .

They went back to the Dolphin hotel and took a shower .

接著我就接不下去了接下來必須寫到他們在跳舞

和吃烤肉

幫忙想一下怎麼寫

不用太長

還有

人物用到Eric 和grandpa 還有Ruby

謝謝

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  • 1 decade ago
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    文法不太對喔! 意思也怪怪的!

    幫你改一下好不?

    After finishing the treasure hunt, they went back to the Dolphin hotel and took a shower. Afterward Eric asked Ruby to have a drink in one of bars in the hotel, and they went upstairs by an elevator together.

    Then, coincidentally, Eric and Ruby bumped into Grandpa in the same bar, so they chatted about their family barbecue held last vacation. Eric danced with Ruby. Grandpa ate lots of barbecues. All of them enjoyed that night and had fun so much.

    The end~

    這樣不知道跟你前面寫的劇情連不連的起來?

    Source(s): 自己
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