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小妹我最近才剛學英文，英文寫作方面要加強，所以 以下的文章有錯誤的地方請指教。謝謝>"<

（最好是說，該改成什麼、為什麼要改，小女理解能力很差）

最近我看到一部電影「終極假期」，讓我愛上一個好萊塢電影女星「皇后拉蒂法」，故事大綱是一位在百貨公司工作的女業務員，被醫生誤診已罹患癌症末期，生命只剩下大約1個月的時間，所以她決定拋下一切，把自已所有的積蓄領出來，到歐洲渡假。

這部電影讓我感動的地方在於，女主角面對生命的短暫卻展現出積極的態度，並讓我了解如何做真正的自已，如何追求自已想做的事情。

The late I watched a movie 「Last Holiday」, let me love a「Queen Latifah」in Hollywood actress .

Movie synopsis

A saleswoman working in a department store, she mistake has a terminal illness for doctor, live to be left over about a month, so she decision to throw and withdrawal all money of herself , go to European vacation.

This movie makes me moved consist in the main actress behave positive attitude confront transient live.

Let me see 「how to do genuine myself」、「how do pursue I want to do 」

Answer 1

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最近我看到一部電影「終極假期」，讓我愛上一個好萊塢電影女星「皇后拉蒂法」

The late I watched a movie 「Last Holiday」, let me love a「Queen Latifah」in Hollywood actress .

→Lately, I watched a movie "Last Holiday" and it made me adore a Hollywood movie actress, Queen Latifah.

，故事大綱是一位在百貨公司工作的女業務員，被醫生誤診已罹患癌症末期，生命只剩下大約1個月的時間，所以她決定拋下一切，把自已所有的積蓄領出來，到歐洲渡假。

Movie synopsis

A saleswoman working in a department store, she mistake has a terminal illness for doctor, live to be left over about a month, so she decision to throw and withdrawal all money of herself , go to European vacation.

→The movie is about a saleswoman working in a department store who is mistaken to have terminal cancer and one month to live by a doctor. So, she decides to leave everything behind, withdraws all her savings from the bank and goes on a vacation to Europe.

這部電影讓我感動的地方在於，女主角面對生命的短暫卻展現出積極的態度，並讓我了解如何做真正的自已，如何追求自已想做的事情。

This movie makes me moved consist in the main actress behave positive attitude confront transient live.

Let me see 「how to do genuine myself」、「how do pursue I want to do 」

→The movie moves me deeply because the leading actress, though facing her short life has shown her optimistic attitude , and she makes me realize how to be my true self and how to go after the things I really want to do.

Answer 2

修正如下，請參考：

最近我看到一部電影「終極假期」，讓我愛上一個好萊塢電影女星「皇后拉蒂法」，故事大綱是一位在百貨公司工作的女業務員，被醫生誤診已罹患癌症末期，生命只剩下大約1個月的時間，所以她決定拋下一切，把自已所有的積蓄領出來，到歐洲渡假。

這部電影讓我感動的地方在於，女主角面對生命的短暫卻展現出積極的態度，並讓我了解如何做真正的自已，如何追求自已想做的事情。

Recently I saw a movie ,「Last Holiday」,which made me adrime a Hollywood actress,「Queen Latifah」.

The outline of this movie is about a woman clerk who working in a department store, she was disdiagnosed as a terminal patient with around one month live by a doctor, so she made a decision to discard everything she possessed , withdrawed all of the money she had saved and went to Europe for a vacation.

The plot of the movie ,which makes me moved consists in the main actress takes a positive attitude to confront her transient live, that let me realize how to do a genuine self and how to pursue what I want to do .

Answer 3

這是我自已辛苦翻的，我知道文法結構和片語字彙有很大的錯誤，但不想回答也用不著說我是用機器翻的吧。我用機器翻的那我何必po上來丟臉。

Answer 4

翻譯軟體的傑作吧？

Answer 5

基本上回答者的解答也是錯誤的喔

由於我目前要離線了

所以不介意的話把問題留言在我的部落格

放在語言學習討論區裡

有空我會上去為妳解答

http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/fairyland-loveinpenghu

Answer 6

Recently I saw(電影用see, 電視用watch) a movie 「Last Holiday」which made me love「Queen Latifah」in Hollywood actress .

Movie synopsis

A saleswoman who is working in a department store, she is mistake terminal illness by a doctor of 1 month life left. So she decide to throw and withdrawal all money of herself , goes (第三人單數) vacation to Europe.

This movie makes me moved consist in the main actress behave positive attitude confront transient live.