熙玹 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請各位大大幫我矯正直接中翻英的文法好嗎?

請各位大大幫我矯正一下我的文章,謝謝!~

My dream is lets me concentrate in anything matter,

likes Su Li Wen ,she concentrate to the taekwondo,

even if is tp get hurt. to fall down , still crawls up continues to struggle.

Peng Cheng Min is also same,he concentrate to the baseball,

even if is just hit Olympic games , still at the ball park plays the

baseball.

中文是這樣的:

我的夢想是讓我專注於每一件事情,

就像蘇麗文,她專注於跆拳道,

就算受傷.跌倒也還是爬起來繼續奮鬥,

彭政閔也一樣,他專注於棒球,

就算剛打完奧運回來,卻還是上場打球。

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  • 1 decade ago
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    My dream is let myself concentrating on everything,

    likes Li Wen Su,she concentrate upon the taekwondo,

    even if she got hurt or fell down between the game ,she still crawled up and continued to finish the game.

    Cheng Min Peng is the same, he concentrate on baseball,

    though he just finished the Olympic games , he’s still go to the ball

    park and playing the baseball.

    2008-09-08 21:39:00 補充:

    let是使役動詞,後面的受詞補語被動用p.p,主動用ing;

    第一個concentrate用on,未避免一直重複用on,第二個改用upon,和on是一樣

    的;

    時態要注意一下,過去的事情要擺過去式;

    人名的姓擺名字後面;

    第一個用even if,第二個可以換成though;

    and是連接詞,前後詞性要相同。

    大概就是這樣:)希望有解決到你的問題。

    2008-09-08 21:40:37 補充:

    Cheng Min Peng is the same, he concentrate on baseball的concentrate要加"s"XD

    Source(s): myself, 自己, 自己
  • 1 decade ago

    它給我的意義是鼓勵及追求夢想,

    我想寫這篇文章的理由是...

    英文功課......

    我才小六......

  • 1 decade ago

    正確翻譯如下

    My dream is concentrating on everything I do.

    Like Su Li-wen, she concentrated on kickboxing.

    Returning to the battle, even if she got hurt.

    Peng Cheng-min is also a good example.

    He concentrated on baseball.

    He just finished the Olympics contest and come back, but he went for the next competition without relaxation.

    以上只是對於文法的修正

    其它的像是中文語意有誤不予改正

    例如

    夢想是專注於每件事 應該不是這麼說

    依照下列文意應該是想說

    妳的夢想是跌倒了還要能爬起來

    專注這詞不適於本篇短文

    建議多閱讀英文書籍 以後會有很大收穫

    有任何問題到我部落格留言

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  • 1 decade ago

    My dream lets me concentrate on everything,(兩個動詞不能直接放在一起. concentrate 要接on 不能用 in 係指專注於之意 )

    just like Su Li Wen ,she concentrate her attention on the taekwondo.(concentrate one's attention on 也是只專注於的意思)

    Even if she is injured and take a fall, she still stands up continues to struggle.(take a fall&fall down 意思一樣)

    And Peng Cheng Min is the same,he concentrates on the baseball,(參考上述)

    even if he just came back from joining the Olympic ,he practices playing the baseball from now on.(這樣比較順....我覺得)

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  • 1 decade ago

    寫很好~只不過我想問你

    你為什麼想寫這篇文章?

    它給你的意義是什麼?

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