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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請文法高手 幫忙改文法錯誤唷

The first reason is that people can save plenty of money. For example, Taiwanese want to learn English in America. Then, they are not only just paying the tuition fees but also rental fees. Besides, international students must have insurances during educating period. In contrary, if they choose to study foreign language in their own country, they do need to pay a huge amount of money. Therefore, it is clear that people can save money if they learn foreign language in their own country.

Second, stress is a prime reason. For example, we know that studying in the abroad is not very easy for people. They have to deal with their meals, utility bills and culture shock by themselves. Besides, if people do not have any friend there, the stress can be made. People might give up to learning foreign language continuously under the pressure. Therefore, people who learn foreign language in their own country might feel happy instead of stress.

Third, there are many excellent language centres in their country. For instance, there are many cram schools or language centres in Taiwan. They hire excellent teachers to shape their students. Moreover, they will collect sophisticated past papers for students who want to participating in tests. Furthermore, if students want to learn from native speakers, there are many foreign teachers available. It is clear that people can learn foreign language in their own country because there have an excellent media to learn.

Of course, there is an argument to be made for people. However, I still believe that my position is built on a solid foundation.

有錯的部分麻煩幫我大寫或HIGHLIGHT 起來

(麻煩在後面幫我簡單說明為什麼有錯唷^_^ 謝謝您)

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  • Shelly
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    1 decade ago
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    The first reason is that people can save plenty of money. For example, SOME Taiwanese want to learn English in America. Then, they not only HAVE TO PAY the tuition but also rental fees. Besides, international students must BUY insurances. In CONTRAST, if they choose to study A foreign language in their own country, they do NOT need to pay a huge amount of money. Therefore, it is clear that people can save money if they learn A foreign language in their own country.

    (1)不是所有台灣人都想要在美國學英語,所以前面加個SOME

    (2)你用現在進行式應該是想表達你的無奈,但用進行式跟前後不太搭,所以我改為have to pay…

    (3) tuition就是學費,不用再加fees

    (4) 用buy更可以突顯需要花錢

    (5) during educating period是多餘的,因為你已經指出是students

    (6) 請熟記片語: In contrast, On the contrary,不可以交替使用

    (7) 注意language是單數可數名詞,前面必須有冠詞,以下亦同

    Second, stress is a prime reason. For example, we know that studying abroad is not very easy for people. They have to deal with their “meals”, utility bills and culture shock by themselves. Besides, if people do not have any friendS there, the stress DOUBLED. People might GIVE UP LEARNING THE foreign language continuously under the pressure. Therefore, people who learn A foreign language in their own country might feel LESS stress THAN THOSE ABROAD.

    (1) abroad本身是副詞,前面不需介係詞in

    (2) meals是三餐的意思,建議可以用life表達,包涵一切生活種種

    (3) …do not have any friend”s”, 這邊通常會用複數

    (4) stress can be made是什麼意思?是說如果沒有任何朋友一起奮鬥,會顯得無助嗎? 那麼可以用the stress doubled(加倍).

    (5) give up N. / Ving

    (6) 因為你第二段主要講出國的壓力很大,最後一句跳到所以在國內學比較快樂,感覺有點搭不上,所以建議用比較的方式為兩者做個聯結.

    2008-09-08 16:11:57 補充:

    Third, there are many excellent language centres in TAIWAN. For instance, there are many cram schools or language centres. They hire excellent teachers to ASSIST their students. Moreover, they will collect sophisticated past EXAMS for students who want to PARTICIPATE in tests.

    2008-09-08 16:12:19 補充:

    Furthermore, if students want to learn from native speakers, there are many foreign teachers available. It is clear that people can learn A foreign language in their own country because there ARE MANY excellent media FOR LEARNING (TO LEARN FROM).

    2008-09-08 16:12:35 補充:

    (1) 這邊的their指的是誰的? (their country = Taiwan)?

    (2) 用shape感覺怪怪的, assist(幫助)如何?

    (3)考古題: past tests/exams

    (4) want to + V.

    (5) 存在的”有”要用there is/are, media是medium的複數,所以用複數動詞are

    (6) media可供學習,用to learn並不適合,因為我們學的不是media這個東西,而是它所提供的東西. 因此用 for learning或 to learn from比較好

    2008-09-08 16:12:54 補充:

    Of course, THERE IS AN ARGUMENT TO BE MADE FOR PEOPLE. However, I still believe that my position is built on a solid foundation.

    (1) …there is an argument to be made for people. 是”別人會有其它意見”的意思嗎?那可以這樣寫: there might be different arguments made by others.

    Source(s): me
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