舞玥 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

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原文是如下:

現今許多公司都利用了這套「資料庫管理系統」,來統一管理公司的資料,整合公司或相關業務共享相同的資料,相對的傳統檔案管理,就漸漸的比較沒有再使用了。

在本文中,所要探討的是有關「資料庫管理系統」的相關研究,以及比較它與傳統檔案管理差異的地方,我們規劃了,探討專題製作背景及目的、專題製作方法與步驟、專題製作理論探討、專題製作設計,以及結論建議。

本專題將旅遊資訊的這個主題,套入了資料庫管理系統,使得旅遊資訊可以更加的廣泛,便於統一管理資料與維護,也使用了條件結構、MsgBox、InputBox,這些技術。

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翻譯後

Today many companies all made use of this set of" DataBase Management System ",to unify to manage the data of the company. Integrate company or related business to share same data. The opposite traditional file manages, Gradual of the comparison didn't use again.

In this text, want what to inquire into is the related research of relevant" DataBase Management System ",and the place comparing it to manage difference with traditional file. We programed ,Inquire into the background of the special subject manufacture and purpose, The special subject manufactures method and step, The special subject manufacture theories inquires into, The special subject manufacture designs,and the conclusion suggest.

This special subject will travel the topic of information, the set went into “DataBase Management System”, the tour information of making can be more extensive, easy to unify management data and maintenance, Also used condition structure, MsgBox,InputBox, These technique.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Today many companies all make use of this suite of

    "DataBase Management System",

    to centralize the data management of the company,

    to integrate the identical data shared by the company or related businesses.

    In contrast, the traditional file management, is gradually phased out.

    This text explores the relevant research of "DataBase Management System",

    and compares the differences between it and the traditional file management.

    It includes the investigation of the project's background and purpose,

    the project's methods and steps, the theory discussions,

    the design, conclusion and further suggestions.

    The project applies the topic of travel information into

    "DataBase Management System",

    making the travel information more extensive,

    and suitable to consolidate the data and maintain it,

    It also demonstrates techniques such as condition structure, MsgBox, and InputBox.

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