英文短文 這樣寫有哪些可以改進?

個人覺得文法應該不是很適洽

希望有人可以給些意見 !!

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Do you share gossip?

Yes, it was funny for life of Taiwan.

There are a lot of confusions in our society. People were empty.

May be gossip can reduse people's unhappy from life. But, there are a lot of gossips in our society wasn't well. Because many of that were not true. It may be cause more trouble in our life. So, share the gossip shoule be not overdo.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Do you gossip?

    Yes, life in Taiwan is funny. (你是要說台灣的生活很好笑? 還是?)

    There are a lot of confusions in our society. People are shallow, maybe gossip can reduce their depression in life. There are a lot of gossips in our society which is incorrect and many of them are not true. This growing epidemic will cause more trouble in our life.

    Therefore, spreading gossips should not be encouraged.

    我幫你改了文法和一些辭彙

    希望有幫到

    Source(s): 自己
  • 1 decade ago

    意見如下,請參考:

    Do you share gossip?

    Yes, it is a fun for Taiwanese life .

    (it is funny for…..”它對台灣人的生活是很有趣的” 也是正確的,只是表達的意思不同,it is a fun for…….. “它在台灣人生活裡是一項娛樂,惟該句應使用現在式,因它是過去的事實,到現在仍存在,life of Taiwan 改為Taiwanese life)

    There are a lot of confusions in our society. people's hearts are empty, maybe gossips can redu(c)e unhappiness from their life.

    (什麼是 empty 空虛的,建議加 hearts 字,而”心裡空虛” 是一現象及事實,應使用現在式,May be 應合成一字 Maybe, unhappy是形容詞應改為名詞 unhappiness, their 移至 life 前面,注意各句的字首如不是另起一段,應使用小寫,people's 及maybe)

    But too many gossips in our society wasn't good, because many of those were not true(或truths), it may causes more troubles to our lives, so, sharing gossips shoul(d) not be overdone.

    (But 後之逗點去除,There are a lot of gossips 改too many gossips ,以避免與前面使用過的語法重複, well 改 good,感覺較順較通俗,because many of that 改because many of those,因是複數的gossips, It may be cause more trouble 改It may cause(s) more trouble(s),去除 be, 因be後須加形容詞或名詞,cause 卻是動詞 ,trouble 加 s,causes ......in 改 causes......to,our life 改 our lives, share gossip should be not overdo. 改sharing gossips shoul(d) not be overdone, share 加ing 成為分詞,將sharing gossip(s) 當做一行為名詞來用,should be not 改 should not be, overdo 改 overdone, 因應是被動式。)

    另請注意在一整段文字內,各句間應使用逗點,且各句頭一字應小寫。

  • 1 decade ago

    Do you also gossip like others doing ?

    I feel rediculous on what life it looks like now in Taiwan.

    There is too much confusion in our socity. People feels lost.

    Gossip may help people to release the suffering from life, but it is not a good thing to see too much gossipe showed in our socity. Gossiping with untrue story will not do any help but only bring more trouble to our owns life. So just don't overdo it.

  • 1 decade ago

    Did you ever share with gossips?

    Yes, they were funny for life in Taiwan.

    There are a lot of confusion in our society. Peoples are spinsters,and

    may be gossip could reduce their biles in life. But, there are a lot of gossips which are bad in our society . Because many of them are not true. It might cause more trouble in our life. So, sharing gossips shoule be not overdone.

    這是我覺得比較好的方式,修正你一些語法跟時態,你可以參考看看,希望有幫到你喔!有問題你再問吧 ~

    ps.希望可以選我喔

    2008-08-22 22:42:02 補充:

    Yes, they were funny for life in Taiwan(were改成are喔,抱歉)

    Source(s): 自己
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