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1. The name of the borough you live in
2. A description of the neighborhood
3. Who lives in your neighborhood?
4. Good things about your neighborhood—fun things to do
5. Things about your neighborhood you would change or fix
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Imagine that you are far, far away beyond the stars. Well, if I told you that I lived there I would be lying. The truth is that I live in the Bronx. I am one of the 50,000 people that live on Allerton Avenue. Allerton is in the east Bronx. Allerton is a very interesting neighborhood and I like living here. Allerton is nothing special; however, it is adequate for me.
The Allerton section of the Bronx is an incredibly diverse neighborhood. There are two parts of the Bronx: Bronxwood, the southern section of the Bronx and Laconia the Northern section of the Bronx. Bronxwood Avenue has a large population of Italian-Americans and Albanian-Americans, as well as Asians, Hispanics, West-Indians, and other groups. Whereas Laconia has a population of mostly Hispanics.
Allerton is a very interesting and enjoyable neighborhood. There are many fun things to do living on Allerton. For example, going to parks such as Phillip Mazzei Playground and Pelham Parkway Park. I also like to enjoy going to the Allerton branch library. In addition, I enjoy eating at ihop and McDonalds. I like many other things about Allerton. What I like most is that there are varieties of ethnicities. I also like that some of my family and friends live in my neighborhood.
On the other hand, there are things that I dislike and would like to change. I dislike that there are not any malls or enough department stores in the neighborhood; I would like to change that. In addition, I would also like to change the fact that there are not enough parks or restaurants, and there are not enough traffic lights. There are also are not any hospitals or firehouses close by; I think that is the most important thing that I would like to change.
As one can see, Allerton may not be the best neighborhood, but personally think that Allerton is a fine neighborhood. I may not be able to tell you everything about Allerton but I bet that if you came here, you will see for yourself that it is not bad at all.