詠裕 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

我把自我簡介中翻英 請問這樣正確嗎

嗨~大家好,我叫XXX,我沒有英文名字,我今年24歲,

住在XXX,家裡有四個成員,父母親跟一個弟弟,

是家中長子,畢業於親民技術學院二技部電機工程系,

我的興趣有游泳,撞球,玩電腦,等等....

目前剛從空軍下士退役,還在待業中,希望自己能有份穩定的事業,

若未來有機會進入貴公司,我願意不斷地學習、不斷地精進自己的專業知識。

hello everyone, My name is XXX, I do not have English name, I am 24

years old , lives in XXX, in the family has four members, the parents

with a younger brother, I am the eldest son in my family , I am graduates to

chinmin technical institute

electrical machinery engineering department, my interest

has the swimming, the billiards, plays the computer, and so on... I at present just retired from air force , moreover in the waiting work, I hoped to

have the Stable enterprise, Thanks everybody

請問這樣翻正確嗎~?

煩請大大幫我挑出錯誤導正@@

謝謝

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    1 decade ago
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    嗨~大家好,我叫XXX,我沒有英文名字,我今年24歲,

    住在XXX,家裡有四個成員,父母親跟一個弟弟,

    是家中長子,畢業於親民技術學院二技部電機工程系,

    我的興趣有游泳,撞球,玩電腦,等等....

    目前剛從空軍下士退役,還在待業中,希望自己能有份穩定的事業,

    若未來有機會進入貴公司,我願意不斷地學習、不斷地精進自己的專業知識。

    Hi, everyone. My name is XXX, and I don't have a English name. I am 24 years old this year. I live in XXX. There are four members in my family, my parents and my brother. I am the oldest child in my family. I graduated from the department of electrical engineering of Chin Min Institude of Technology. My hobbies are swimming, playing snooker, playing computer games......etc. Recently retired from air force service, searching for a job opportunity. I hope I can have a stable job. If I have the chance to work in your company in the future, I am willing to learn and advance my skills continuously.

    這位大大:你寫的東西完全改不了,所以我重新翻譯一次

    2008-08-14 23:31:51 補充:

    最後可以說:Thank you for your attention.(如果是用講的)或Thank you for your precious time.(寫的或講的都可以)

    2008-08-14 23:32:38 補充:

    唉~樓上的文法都不對~哪有一個句子那麼長呢

    Source(s): 自己
  • 1 decade ago

    我的翻譯:Hi ~ everyone, I call XXX, I do not have English name, my this year 24

    years old, lives in XXX, in the family has four members, the parents

    with a younger brother, is in the family the eldest son, graduates to

    cherishing the people the technical institute two techniques

    department electrical machinery engineering department, my interest

    has the swimming, the billiards, plays the computer, and so on... At

    present just retired from air force corporal, but also in waiting for

    jobs, hoped oneself could have the share stable enterprise, if the

    future will have the opportunity to enter your firm, I was willing

    unceasingly to study, unceasingly to strive own specialized knowledge.

    網站翻譯:Hi~everyone good, I call XXX, I don't have English name, and I am 24 years old this year,

    Live in XXX, the home contains four members and the parents heel is a younger brother,

    Is an eldest son in house, graduate from to kiss people 2-year technological program department electrical engineering department in the institute of technology,

    My interest contains swimming, billiards, play a computer, etc.....

    Just backed service from air force's corporal currently, still and just need an industry in, hope that oneself can have a business of stability,

    If there is in the future a chance into your company, I would like to constantly learn, the professional knowledge of constantly aggressive I.

    大大的翻譯結果:你好大家, 我的名字是XXX, 我沒有英國名字, 我24 歲, 生活在XXX, 在家庭有四名成員, 父母與一個弟弟, 我是長子在我家, 我是畢業生對chinmin 技術學院電機工程部, 我的興趣有游泳, 台球, 戲劇電腦, 等等... 我從空軍當前退休了, 而且在等待的工作, 我希望有穩定的企業, 感謝大家

    Source(s): 自己+網站
  • 1 decade ago

    Hi everyone my name is________.I do not have a English name. I am 24 years old and I lives in______.I have four members in my family, my parents and a younger brothers. I am the oldest child in my family. I graduate in chinmin techinical institute electrical machinery engineering department. My hobbies are swimming, billiards and play computer and so on. I just retired from air force. I hoped I can have a stable job. If I got the chance to work in your company. I will be willing to learn more things and work hard for your company. Thank you!

    希望能幫上你的忙 加油!

    Source(s): Myself
  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    颱風說的對 哪有句子一直逗號的

    投颱風一票

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  • 1 decade ago

    Hello everyone, My name is XXX, I don't have English nickname, i am 24 year-old and lives in XXX. There are four members in my family, the parents and young brother, i am the eldest in my family, i am graduate from Chin Min institute of technology, department of electrical machinery engineering, my hobby is swimming, billiards and play computer and so on.... at the present i just retired from air force, moreover, i am unemployed, i hope i could enter the Stable enterprise, thank you for listening

    2008-08-14 23:19:54 補充:

    可以加入我MSN paul740628@hotmail.com

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