宗殷 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

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Another example that happened in China is called “Massacre in Tiananmen Square.” This is happened in the 4 June 1989, many student and intellectuals are killed by the military, because they want that their government can give people more rights to speak, they want to have more freedom, and so they are sitting in front of the Tiananmen Square to ask government to give them more freedom, but we know it is impossible for the communistic country to give the people freedom or rights to speak whatever they want, and government hates people to hue and cry, therefore the military was try to killed the people who are sitting in front of the Tiananmen Square. It is a very cruel thing, and I was feel contempt to be a Chinese, even I am not born in China, and because people cannot have a rights to speak, therefore the China is still a very straggly country nowadays, it just like our classmate Roger Ocampo say “with out freedom of speech our thoughts and expressions would be stagnant. Who would question authority”?

We are living in the democracy and freedom country, and people are getting used to this life, so for the article “So what does it do for me” say, that “51 percent of high school students believing that government should vet stories going into the newspaper. I think it is ridiculous, because our high school students is only worry about what they are going to do on the weekend, and it makes me feel sad, they totally forgot how hard are our ancestor working to fight for human’s rights and freedom, it is important that people have a rights to know everything. Otherwise the country must be going to the devil very quickly, if the government tries to hide something.

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    1 decade ago
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    Another example that happened in China is called “Massacre in Tiananmen Square.” This is happened in the 4 June 1989, many student and intellectuals are killed by the military, because they want that their government can give people more rights to speak, they want to have more freedom, and so they are sitting in front of the Tiananmen Square to ask government to give them more freedom, but we know it is impossible for the communistic country to give the people freedom or rights to speak whatever they want, and government hates people to hue and cry, therefore the military was try to killed the people who are sitting in front of the Tiananmen Square. It is a very cruel thing, and I was feel contempt to be a Chinese, even I am not born in China, and because people cannot have a rights to speak, therefore the China is still a very straggly country nowadays, it just like our classmate Roger Ocampo say “with out freedom of speech our thoughts and expressions would be stagnant. Who would question authority”?

    We are living in the democracy and freedom country, and people are getting used to this life, so for the article “So what does it do for me” say, that “51 percent of high school students believing that government should vet stories going into the newspaper. I think it is ridiculous, because our high school students is only worry about what they are going to do on the weekend, and it makes me feel sad, they totally forgot how hard are our ancestor working to fight for human’s rights and freedom, it is important that people have a rights to know everything. Otherwise the country must be going to the devil very quickly, if the government tries to hide something

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