kit asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

發英文email徵工作

我想大家都有用過104之類的求職網

應徵工作除了要有一份完美的履歷表

在寄發履歷表前都有一段前言

剪了一段像是這樣

"您好,我叫《某某》,近日得知貴公司在徵《RUKN0026‧澳洲農場果園工作者》,希望能有參加面試的機會,謝謝!"

請過來人以在國外求職過的經驗告訴我,以email求職應注意的事

還有郵件主旨要寫什麼才恰當?

請寫一份英文範例

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  • 1 decade ago
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    範例:

    Current Address 08/13/2008

    UMKC

    210 W, Gregory Street # 2E,

    Kansas City, MO, 64114

    Tel: +181-816-916-8553

    peichi.lee@yahoo.com.tw

    Dear Mr./Mrs./Ms. xxxx,

    (To whom it may concern, )

    My name is xxx, I notice that there is a vacancy in F & B department as an assistant manager in your hotel which I am highly interested in. I just graduated from UMKC, my available date will be at 09/01/2008.

    Enclosed my resume for reference. As I am greatly interested in working in hospitality industry, I took all the courses which related to hotel management. And I have graduated from UMKC with postgraduated high diploma.

    I have one year experience working in Westin restaurant in USA. I spent five months working at the salad bar where I was trained as an bartender. I also spent two months in reception where I learned how to make an reservation via phone calls for customers. Moreover, I worked at the accounting department for three months where I built up my financial skills in calculating the food budget. Through my working experience, I have gained a lot of knowledge on operating a restaurant, employee training, accounting, computer system input. Meanwhile, my communication and negociation skills also be highly eastablished.

    I see this position as a great opportunity for me to utilize what I have learnt from school and skills I obtained from previous working experience. I would like to work for your company by exploring my potentials. I will greatly appreciate if I can have a further chance to speak with you in person regarding the position you are seeking.

    Please free feel to contact me at peichi.lee@yahoo.com.tw (or +181-816-916-8853). Once again, thank you for your time. I am looking forward to hearing from you shortly.

    Your faithfully,

    Pei Chi, Lee

    2008-08-13 08:01:17 補充:

    註:郵件主旨應該寫上你想要應徵的工作項目,以及你的名字

    例如:Application in assistant manager in xxx dept.-Pei Chi, Lee

    2008-08-13 08:01:46 補充:

    注意事項:

    1. 如果知道你應徵的部門的經理或是主管或者是人事部經理的姓名,寫在開頭 Dear Mr./Mrs./Ms. xxx是比較好的,如果真的不知道才寫 To whom it may concern

    2. 應徵信上面要寫你打寫這封信的日期、姓名、連絡電話、地址、EMAIL

    2008-08-13 08:02:21 補充:

    注意事項

    3. 第一段寫上你從哪得知該公司有在應徵什麼職位的人,你什麼時候可以開始工作(有的話!可以附上你的履歷)

    4. 第二段寫上你的最高學歷、你的專業是什麼

    2008-08-13 08:02:48 補充:

    注意事項

    5. 第三段寫上你最滿意或是評價最高的工作經驗、什麼樣的職位、學了什麼東西、你工作中的強項是什麼

    6. 第四段寫上你認為你有什麼樣的特質跟專業,是會讓該公司給你一個面試以及工作的機會

    7. 寫上感謝言

    Source(s): 我的經驗累積, 我的經驗累積, 我的經驗累積, 我的經驗累積, 我的經驗累積
  • 1 decade ago

    1) Find out the recipient's name and best to address them as Ms/Mr. XXX rather than "to whom it may concern"

    2) first paragraph should always state your name, how you found out about this job and what abilities you have that are suitable for it

    3) 2nd and third paragraph should be succinct and precise about your talent/ abilities

    4) have a conclusion that gives them your contact information again and change tone according to the company's work culture. if work culture is competitive and aggressive => more aggressive tone

    For example:

    Subject: ABC company Marketing manager application

    Dear Mr. Craig,

    My name is -----, currently a graduate from ----- University majoring in Marketing. I heard about this job opportunity from (friend/ newspaper etc) and strong believe that my (talents: leadership skills/ strong persuasive skills etc) would be immensely helpful to your organization.

    (talent 1) is the most crucial thing for your company.... etc etc Elaborate the strength of their company and why this talent of yours is helpful.

    (talent 2) ....same thing

    conclusion: Please give me a chance to prove to you that I am the one you are looking for. My contact number is 123456789 and email is xxx@yahoo.com I will call back next Tuesday to talk in further details.

    regards,

    name.....

    title

    ATTACH: resume

    Source(s): myself +book
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