安小喬 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請問Please find the attached....

我想表達請查收附加檔案並填寫表格,再EMAIL或傳真回來。

請問:以下寫法正確嘛?

Please find the attached files completing the form, then return us via fax or email.

若不正確,請告知錯誤為何?

動詞後面若還有動作,是否可以變成動名詞?以上句為例,find後面再接complete如何寫呢?

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  • 羅莉
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
    Best Answer

    Please find the attached files completing the form, then return us via fax or email.

    → Please find here-attached the blank form, complete it, and then fax/email it back to us.

    → Attached is the blank form which please complete and return to us via fax/email.

    第一例是並列句法, 請注意find, complete, fax/email等都是地位相同的動詞, 各以逗號隔開, 共用同一主詞(祈使句省略的you).

    第二例是用關係子句, 以which代表form, 並作為 complete與return的受詞.

    2008-08-05 14:54:42 補充:

    here-attached是副詞.

    Source(s): 英文相關行業20年; 業務經驗
  • 1 decade ago

    這樣可能會較好, 給你參考.

    Please find the attached questionnaire/files/form. We thank you for your help in providing us with this information.

    請見附件的問卷/檔案/表格, 感謝你的協助題供我們這些資料.

    And Please email or fax it back to us. Thank you very much.

    請EMAIL或傳真回來給我們. 謝謝.

    不太確定你要表達的真正意思, 有些名詞可換成你要的正確英文. okay?

  • Lucy
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    看起來只有completing這邊有點怪怪的

    有兩種改法:

    Please find the attached files, complete the form, and (then) reply us via fax or e-mail.

    Please find the attached files. After completing the form, please reply us via fax or e-mail.

    還有一種比較簡短的寫法也可以:

    Please complete the files attached and reply us via fax or e-mail.

  • 1 decade ago

    Please check the attachment and fully complete the form, and please

    send me back by fax for email. Thank you.

    錯誤:

    Attachment 為附件 不必再額外加上file.

    Completing 為正在進行中, 以Complete為形容即可.

    return為返回, 在此使用send me back比較順也因此去掉us 或 via.

    2008-08-05 14:37:44 補充:

    以上為個人與客戶經驗, 希望能夠給予幫助^^

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