What think you of the ending Journal entry?

"Every time I cried, Then laughed at things Thought inane... Patiently, a gravelly voice "Would assure me, the words Were quite insane... Then explain them semantically, Linguistically emphatically... "How all fell to Higher Order, No need a comma, not a Capital...all questions Laid... show more "Every time I cried,
Then laughed at things
Thought inane...
Patiently, a gravelly voice

"Would assure me, the words
Were quite insane...
Then explain them semantically,
Linguistically emphatically...

"How all fell to Higher Order,
No need a comma, not a
Capital...all questions
Laid to rest...

"Leaving today, 8-29-08,
With awaited Manuscript,
A broken heart, a plea 'let's
Do it all again'...

"Dr. Swetman, into this morning,
Worked, corrected, worked...
All I can do is leave...
My heart in Biloxi...

"Arguing thin-ice points of
Structure...knowing this
Manuscript is his Crowning
Achievement...."
Update: For him to be that sick, and still work to the very wee hours of the morning....then teach at William Carey College for 9 hours tonight...speechless...
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