I wrote a song for my boyfriend , please tell me if its good, [ using the song Suffocate , as the beat]?

Okay here it goes :

As I sit here reminisce about all the things we been through , i can't see myself in life without you boy. When i look into your eyes , feel your touch and see your smile after 10 months i cant lie , i still get butterflies. My heart belongs to you until the day I die. Let me tell you , your love got my hypnotized.

i know that we will always be together , Even though we fuss & fight i know that our love will always unite. I'm not ever gonna let you go. You and i both know this loves fo sho.

I love your hugs , love your kisses , you out beat everyone of my wishes. I can't see myself with another guy , you will always gonna be by my side.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    aww! thats so sweet! he'll love it! you kno, you actually have the potential for a songwriter, and if youre a good singer, possibly a singer!

  • 4 years ago

    0 - gotta scouse borrow your Smashing Pumkins, (ooh, i've got have been given my own) decrease than 0 - Elvis Costello (great song) a million - a million (as in "Is The Lonliest type" (as lined by making use of Aimee Mann) 2 - 2 human beings (the Beatles or Aimee Mann w/ Michael Penn) 3 - 3 Years in the past right this moment - equipped to Spill 4 - 4 Corners - the sea and Cake 5 - 5 companies - Fugazi 6 - Six Barrel Shotgun - BRMC 7 - Seven Days of the Week - the Arm of Roger 8 - 8 Days each and every week 9 - Who Has the 9 - twine 10 - Ten Percenter - Frank Black 11 - 11 - Primus 12 - Twelve - Jurassic 5 13 - 13 Steps Lead Down - Elvis Costello (or 13 by making use of enormous enormous call or Elliott Smith 14 - No Fourteen - Love 15 - Fifteen Keys - Uncle Tupelo sixteen - sixteen - Sebadoh 17 - Anthems for a Seventeen 365 days old female - broken Social Scene 18 - the Moon is the type 18 - Silver Jews 19 - F-19 - adult males At artwork 20 - 20% Amnesia - Elvis Costello Drat, i've got have been given 22 and 24, yet I hit a wall at 21 (a minimum of devoid of cheating).

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Its adorable.

    Especially if your boyfriend is into that. ;]

    I love the line "after 10 months i cant lie , i still get butterflies"

    its really cute.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    "You and i both know this loves fo sho" thats my favourite

    really expresses your love for one another. (Y)

    good job honey!!

    w0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0

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  • 1 decade ago

    that's really cute! it made me sad and almost brought tears to my eyes! i just know he's gonna love it : )

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    its really good i love it

    but im not sure how he will react to something like that

  • 1 decade ago

    WOW!!! its very beatiful . He is going to love it

  • 1 decade ago

    omfg thats amazing.... he'll love it

  • mrs
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    aww, it's really good. he'll love it!

  • 1 decade ago

    its amazing

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