小軒 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

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My summer vacation plan

First,I want to improve my English caliber. My English caliber is not enough to deal with English exam which is in the senior high school. I very not joy in my English listening. I will listen the Studio Classroom every day and read the Studio Classroom,too. I hope I can improve my English listening.

Second,I project review the book in the last semester in the summer. I will project Chinese,Math and English. One day I project review Chinese and next day review Math and three day review English. I hope review English,Chinese and Math in one month.

I project review the book on the morning and on the afternoon I will do something which I want to do. At night I can listen the Studio Classroom. It is very easy to finish.

I don't read the book long day,I can do something which I want to do. I will have a breezy and good summer vacation.

I hope I can have a very good vacation. My vacation will be happy and good. I will finish my vacation plan. This plan is projected by me. I don' project a plan which I can' finish.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    My summer vacation plan

    First,I WOULD want to improve my English SKILLS. My English SKILLS is not GOOD enough to deal with English exam in the senior high school. I AM very not joy in my English listening. (I AM ENJOY LISTENING TO ENGLISH PROGRAM)I will listen TO the Studio Classroom PROGRAMevery day WITH TEXT BOOK. I hope I can improve my English listening.

    Second,I AM PLANING ON reviewING the last semester bookS in the summer. THEY ARE Chinese,Math and English. FIRST day FOR Chinese and SECOND day FOR Math and THIRD day FOR English IN A CIRCLE ONE MONTH.

    I WILL review the book IN the morning and IN the afternoon AND will do something THAT I want to do. At night I can listen TO the Studio Classroom PROGRAM. It is very easy to finish.

    I WILL NOT read the book ALL DAY LONG. I WOULD LIKE HAVE A LITTLE BIT SPARE TIME THEN I will have a breezy and good summer vacation EXCEPT FOR STUDYING.

    I hope I can have a very good vacation. My vacation will be happy and good. I will finish my vacation plan. This plan is PLANING by MYSELF. I HAVE NEVER MAKE A PLAN THAT I CAN NOT FINISH IT.

    大寫的部份是我訂正的, 希望您滿意.

    您寫的很好,可以很清楚的表達您想要表達的,

    只有一些小小文法的問題,事實上我也是從同樣的錯誤中學來的. 您有一定程度再加把勁指日可待喔 !!

    Wishing you have a wonderful summer vacation.

  • 羅莉
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    其實改得最通順的是dirtyoldman, 可惜未竟全功還譏笑別人.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    活力泉源.....你是外系生? 太丟臉了吧

    2008-07-28 23:51:52 補充:

    My summer vacation plan

    First,I would like to improve my English. My English is not strong enough to deal with English exam which occurs in senior high school. To improve my English language skill, i will be listening to Studio Classroom's tape and reading the magazine everyday. Hopefully this will show some improvement in my listening skill.

    Second, during this vacation i would be doing a review session by going over the books from last semester, including Chinese, math and English. I plan on taking turns reviewing these subjects, for example, one day Chinese, the second day English, and the third day math. I hope i can finish the review within a month.

    I plan to review my books during the morning and in the afternoon, i'll be enjoying my summer vacation. At night I might listen to Studio Classroom. It would be easy to finish.

    其他懶的寫了

    Source(s): 我是牛郎
  • 1 decade ago

    這是我修改嚕的版本~有一些詞有修飾過希望對你有幫助

    My summer vacation plan

    First,I want to improve my English caliber. My English caliber is not enough to deal with English exams is in senior high school. I am not very proficient in my English listening. So, I will listen the Studio Classroom every day and read the Studio Classroom, too. I hope I can improve my English listening.

    Second,I plan to review the school books in the last semester in the summer. It would include Chinese, Math and English. In the first day, I plan to review Chinese and in the next day I would review Math and in the third day I would review English in circles. I hope to review English,Chinese and Math in one month.

    I plan to review the books in the morning and the afternoon. I will do something which I want to do. At night I can listen to the Studio Classroom. It is very easy to finish it.

    I don't read the books a whole day. I can do something which I want to do. I will have a breezy and good summer vacation.

    I hope I can have a very good vacation. My vacation will be happy and fulfilled. I will finish my vacation plan. This plan is projected by myself. I don't project a plan which I can' finish.

    PS 要特別注意名詞的単複數(如BOOKS)唷

    Source(s): 外系生
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