化妝品外銷外包裝英文翻譯問題

請幫我看看我翻譯過去的部份是否有錯誤、誤用文辭和文辭不清的地方,謝謝。:)

清爽卸妝油Recuperating Make-Up Remover

Ingredients: Terpinen-4-ol.Polyol Soluble Licorice Extract P-U. α-Bisabolol. Tocopheryl

Acetate. Squalane. Isononyl Isononanoate. Stearyl Glycyrrhetinate. Paraffin

Oil. Sorbitan Monooleate. Hydrogenated Butylene/Ethlene/Styrene Copolymer.

Hydrogenated Ethylene/Propylene/Styrene Copolymer. Glyceryl Triisostearate.

D&C Blue No.1. Fragrance. Water.

容 量:120ml / 4oz

效 用:徹底清潔肌膚上的污垢及化妝料,同時維護肌膚的柔嫩與健康。

使用方法:1.保持手部及臉部的乾燥。

2.取適量本品抹勻全臉並稍加按摩,使污垢及化妝料徹底溶解。

3.重覆以指腹沾取少許清水按摩全臉,使污垢及化妝料呈現完全水合

乳化狀態。

4.以化妝棉作大部卸除,再以清水沖淨即可。

適用膚質:油性肌膚/混合性肌膚

製造日期:印製於盒底

保存期限:印製於盒底,自製造日起三年。

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青春卸妝油Recuperating Make-Up Remover

Recommended for oily or combination skin

Ingredients: Terpinen-4-ol.Polyol Soluble Licorice Extract P-U. α-Bisabolol. Tocopheryl

Acetate. Squalane. Isononyl Isononanoate. Stearyl Glycyrrhetinate. Paraffin

Oil. Sorbitan Monooleate. Hydrogenated Butylene/Ethlene/Styrene Copolymer.

Hydrogenated Ethylene/Propylene/Styrene Copolymer. Glyceryl Triisostearate.

D&C Blue No.1. Fragrance. Water.

Description: Gently and thoroughly removes facial dirt and make-ups, leaves skin soft

and healthy.

Usage: Apply appropriate amount on the entire face with massage of circle. Take

glimmer of water to emulsify dirt and make-ups, and then cleansing with water.

Caution: For external use only. Keep in cool place and out of the reach of children.

Volume: 120 ml

Batch No. / Manufactured date: Printed under the Packaging.

Expiry Date: Printed under the Packaging, Expires in 3 years.

Manufacturing Address: NO.35,Chuang-chi Rd.,Yenchao Township,Kaohsiung County,Taiwan

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  • 1 decade ago
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    青春卸妝油

    (原句)Recuperating Make-Up Remover

    (建議)Rejuvenating Make-up Remover**

    Recommended for oily or combination skin

    Ingredients: (略)

    Description:

    (原句)Gently and thoroughly removes facial dirt and make-ups, leaves skin soft and healthy.

    (建議)Gently removes impurities and make-up for face, leave skin a soft and healthy feeling.

    Usage:

    (原句)Apply appropriate amount on the entire face with massage of circle. Take glimmer of water to emulsify dirt and make-ups, and then cleansing with water.

    (建議)Apply appropriate amount on the entire face with a gentl and circular motion. Continue to massage your skin until the cleanser emulsify with make-up. Then rinse with water.

    不過(1).這段中文和原來的英文不太一樣...原來的英文沒有提到用化妝棉去除.所以我以你原來的英文為主....(2)有個疑問,這個產品是會變成乳化狀的,不是會產生泡沫的...對吧

    Batch No. / Manufactured date:

    (原句) Printed under the Packaging.

    (建議) Printed on the bottom of package. or Printed on the package.

    Expiry Date:

    (原句)Printed under the Packaging, Expires in 3 years

    (建議) Expires in 3 years after manufactured date.

    2008-08-05 03:19:37 補充:

    那就不用改....

    另外,如果你要像中文一樣,用"化妝棉"的字眼的話,我會建議用Wipe off,用面紙擦去即可。

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    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    希望對你有幫助

    清爽卸妝油成份:

    松油烯-4 -o l.polyol可溶性甘草提取物浦。 α - bisabolol 。 tocopheryl

    醋酸。 squalane 。 isononyl isononanoate 。硬脂glycyrrhetinate 。石蠟

    石油。失水山梨醇monooleate 。氫化丁烯/ ethlene /苯乙烯共聚物。

    氫化乙烯/丙烯/苯乙烯共聚物。甘油triisostearate 。

    發展及藍色1號。香水。水。

    清爽卸妝油

    建議油性皮膚或組合

    成份:松油烯-4 -o l.polyol可溶性甘草提取物浦。 α - bisabolol 。 tocopheryl

    醋酸。 squalane 。 isononyl isononanoate 。硬脂glycyrrhetinate 。石蠟

    石油。失水山梨醇monooleate 。氫化丁烯/ ethlene /苯乙烯共聚物。

    氫化乙烯/丙烯/苯乙烯共聚物。甘油triisostearate 。

    發展及藍色1號。香水。水。

    描述:輕輕地和徹底地消除了面部的污垢和化妝的UPS ,樹葉皮膚軟

    和健康。

    用法:適用於適當的數額,對整個面部按摩的循環。拿

    一線希望水乳化污垢及使製成品,然後清潔水。

    注意:對外只使用。保持在陰涼的地方,和出於對達成的兒童。

    成交量:一百二十〇毫升

    一批號/生產日期:印下的包裝。

    屆滿日期:印刷包裝下,在屆滿三年。

    製造業地址:第35期,莊智路, 814鄉鎮,高雄縣,台灣

    Source(s): 網路
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