非天使 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

One team 的修正後自傳 召領

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I'm XXX, in (my) friend's eyes, I am a (optimistic and sincere) person who (with) ability of communication (and) coordination. (except that), In my (mind), I (have) a sunny, amiable and positive disposition.

I started to play (horn) (when I studied in ) junior high school, (at) then I just (listen to the music of world) duly(這段我不很了解意思,是上音樂會還是聽音樂,暫改如此,請依實際情況修正). I was (studying) in music class when I was a student of (junior) and senior high school, and the most important turning point to me was (the time 去除)when I studied in (the) National Taichung University. (I obtained) countenance and effect from teachers and (classmates or schoolmates), and I joined many different kinds of band as orchestra, wind band , ensemble…. etc. , during the time in band, I was assured that I (would) keep playing horn in band , and I (wished) to become a great (horn去除) player.

(In addition), I (learned) more by joining (in去除) band, (and) I also taught some (students) in wind band (of) other universities, and learning to (do well in teamwork) (through) these experiences, owing to the various members of the band), I had much fun and (more liked) the job (for) it (has) more challenge.

(I) expect to do justice to myself in my work(意思我不很確定), especially in the part of performance, (moreover), I believed I can keep growing up and getting (a head position in)(這句話的意思,我不很確定) my work (with) my strenuosity and (by) introspecting myself (often) , (and) I'll continue to take advance(d 去除) courses to (complete) the life-time learning('s 去除) plan that will let me (be capable and qualified) to my job.

********我認為這是知識交流 非聊天。

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  • ari
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    1 decade ago
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    我在XXX在(我的)朋友的眼中,我是一個(樂觀和真誠的)人誰(同)的能力,溝通(和)協調。 (除外) ,在我的(心) ,我(有)一個陽光燦爛,親切和積極的處置。

    我開始發揮(角) (當我在研究)初中生, (在) ,那麼我剛才(聽的音樂世界)妥(這段我不很了解意思,是上音樂會還是聽音樂,暫改如此,請依實際情況修正) 。我是(學習)在音樂課,當我的學生(初中)和高中,最重要的轉折點,給我(的時間去除) ,當我研究了在( )國立台中大學。 (我獲得的) countenance和效果,從教師和(同學或同學) ,我加入了許多不同類型的樂隊,作為樂團,風帶,合奏… … 。等,在時間,在樂隊,我是放心,我(會)繼續發揮在非洲之角的樂隊,和我(希望) ,以成為一個偉大的(角去除)的球員。

    (此外) ,我(教訓) ,更可透過參加(在去除)樂隊, (和)我還教了一些(學生)在風帶(的)其他的大學,和學習(做好在團隊合作) (通過)這些經驗,由於各成員樂隊) ,我有很大的樂趣和(更喜歡)的工作( ) (有)更多的挑戰。

    (一)預期公道,我在我的工作(意思我不很確定) ,尤其是在部分性能, (此外) ,我相信我能繼續成長,並獲得(頭部的位置) (這句話的意思,我不很確定)我的工作(與)我strenuosity和( )反思自己(通常) , (和)我將繼續採取預先(四去除)課程(完成)生命的時間學習(奇摩去除)計劃,該計劃將讓我(有能力和資格) ,以我的工作。

    是這樣嗎?

    Source(s): google
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