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What do you think of this poem about a famous hot beverage? Be honest please...?

HOT CHOCOLATE

by E***** D*****

HOT CHOCOLATE! Frothy brown stuff,

Tastes like sludge if made like mud;

Dirt and water without love.

If made with love, care, and flavor,

Kindness, whipped cream, and possibly cherries,

It will taste like friendship, verbatim.

With its scalding burns, twirls and whirls,

And the gentle smiles that ensue sipping its caramel-coloured swirls,

Comradeship and sizzling beverages have much to unfurl.

If you don't take the formula with care,

Your whole drink(of both cocoa and friendship),

Will be, unfortunately, repulsive or simply not there.

Friendship is like hot chocolate in so many ways,

It can blossom into something more eventually.

Love, scum, chocolate-flavoured cream...

What will the friendship between US bring?

(In the email I sent to all my friends, the text was light brown with some special effects that I will add to the details.)

Enjoy!

=)

Update:

In the email version, the whole poem is in a light brown font colour, but with some creative stuff, too. The title and "chocolate-flavoured cream" is highlighted in a cream colour, love in the last stanza is red, and scum is black and highlighted in dark brown.

Just getting the image across!!!

=)

Please don't steal my poem and pass it off as your own.

Plagiarism is illegal, I believe.

3 Answers

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  • 1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    I never knew hot chocolate could be so beautiful...

    I really love the poem...

    Now I wish I had a campfire, someone playing a guitar, and a lot of hot cocoa...

  • 1 decade ago

    amazing

    your right

    hot chocolate tastes like friendship!

    keep up the good work!

    love it

  • 1 decade ago

    wow;

    i never thought of hot chocolate in such a way

    this is really good

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