鈞鼎 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

關於托福作文,題目:是否同意知識都是從書上學來的

這是我對於托福練習所寫的題目,希望有人可以幫我批改錯誤,並且告訴我該往哪個方向寫會比較好。謝謝~

題目是:是否同意知識都是從書上學來的

With the advent of time passing by and growing up, humankind who learn from school, jobs and friends have gained a lot of wise from experience resulting from what they feel by themselves and which knowledge books they absorb; therefore, the knowledge interwoven by these material become the rule we believe and implement everyday. By contrasting both knowledge from the books and experience, I prefer experience to books. Thee reason why I think so will be elaborated in following paragraphs.

To begin with, experience learning from daily life is closer than book learning from school. We can learn it from our daily living solving problem we meet everyday; in contrast, book only can teach us rudimentary knowledge doing little help on common decision we have to make fleetingly. That is, Book can teach us how to be polite rather than be aggressive when you encounter bad guys in many situations.

Next to go would be, our body can acquire nothing with book alone; in other word, important should be riveted on not only bearing rules from book but also exercising by ourselves. For example, how can we learn swimming only from book with no effort on practicing? The answer is obvious: we have to try and really get it.

Last but not least, it is in terms of what books say is not always true that we have to be doubtful about some masterful theories from books and authenticating or modifying it. Taking an instance, a large amount of startling findings is stem from scientists’ question and their arduous research. Comparing with learning from what we have seemed with the books, the experience is more reliable.

To sum up, the disparity between books and experiences is not only feasibility but also reliability; nevertheless, we can’t stop getting knowledge from one of these due to the fact that they are correlative.

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0~5分!

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  • ari
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago
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    Thee reason why I think so will be elaborated in following paragraphs.

    第一段只要說明你贊成不贊成 你的句子太長了 這樣很不夠力 最後不用說以下事我的原因 只要把原因簡單的例出來

    To begin with, experience learning from daily life is closer than book learning from school. We can learn it from our daily living solving problem we meet everyday; in contrast, book only can teach us rudimentary knowledge doing little help on common decision we have to make fleetingly. That is, Book can teach us how to be polite rather than be aggressive when you encounter bad guys in many situations.

    To begin with 太不正式了 可以用First of all, 或是其他的字

    Next to go would be, our body can acquire nothing with book alone; in other word, important should be riveted on not only bearing rules from book but also exercising by ourselves. For example, how can we learn swimming only from book with no effort on practicing? The answer is obvious: we have to try and really get it.

    這一個理由跟第一個很像耶 要不要想另一個理由?

    Last but not least, it is in terms of what books say is not always true that we have to be doubtful about some masterful theories from books and authenticating or modifying it. Taking an instance, a large amount of startling findings is stem from scientists’ question and their arduous research. Comparing with learning from what we have seemed with the books, the experience is more reliable.

    你可以用 Third, 或事 Last 不用寫 Last but not least, 很口語化 寫作上不太好

    To sum up, the disparity between books and experiences is not only feasibility but also reliability; nevertheless, we can’t stop getting knowledge from one of these due to the fact that they are correlative.

    總結可以把你說的理由大概的總訴一下起來

    你是托福要用的嗎? 大概3分吧

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