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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請文法高手幫忙修正文法錯誤唷

People are living longer now for several reasons.

Firstly, working space is not close to their hometown.

Secondly, people enjoy their silent lives cozily.

Third, there are less restricted rules. People can do want they want.

A good co-worker would have three characteristics.

Firstly, it is critical characteristic for being a good co-worker to have sense of responsibility.

Second, a good co-worker is an amicable person.

Third, a good co-worker likes to assist everyone when they need some help.

I agree that teenagers have their job when they are still students.

First, they can accumulate their working experiences.

Second, they can learn how to arrange their schedule.

Third, they can adapt easily to new circumstances.

A person I know is planning to move to my hometown.

First, he might like the convenient traffic.

Second, he can enjoy the view of some famous spots.

Third, he might worry about the traffic jam.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    People are living longer now for several reasons.

    Firstly, working place(?) is not close to their hometown.

    Secondly, people enjoy their cozy undisturbed lifestyle.

    Finally, there are fewer restriction rules. People can do whatever they want.

    A good co-worker would have the three following characteristics.

    Firstly, it is critical for a co-worker to have sense of responsibility.

    Secondly, a good co-worker is an amicable person.

    Finally, a good co-worker likes to assist everyone when they need some help.

    I agree that teenagers should have a job when they are still studying.

    Firstly, they can accumulate (build up) their working experiences.

    Secondly, they can learn how to arrange their schedule.

    Finally, they can (would be able to) adapt easily to new circumstances.

    A person I know is planning to move to my hometown.

    Firstly, he might like the convenience of the traffic here.

    Secondly, he can enjoy the view of some famous spots.

    Finally, he might worry about the traffic jam. (ok... this last sentence does not really fit in.. coz all three points ur bringing about in a sequence would either hav to sound all positive or all negative)

  • 1 decade ago

    你希望檢查文法錯誤 那我就先看看文法這一部分

    不過我還是稍微幫你做了一些單字用字上的修正

    這樣文章會比較順

    People are living longer now for several reasons.

    *** 把 longer 改成 far ***

    Firstly, working space is not close to their hometown.

    Secondly, people enjoy their silent lives cozily.

    Third, there are less restricted rules. People can do want they want.

    ***應該是 --- People can do what they want to do . ***

    A good co-worker would have three characteristics.

    Firstly, it is critical characteristic for being a good co-worker to have sense of responsibility.

    Second, a good co-worker is an amicable person.

    Third, a good co-worker likes to assist everyone when they need some help.

    I agree that teenagers have their job when they are still students.

    First, they can accumulate their working experiences.

    Second, they can learn how to arrange their schedule.

    Third, they can adapt easily to new circumstances.

    A person I know is planning to move to my hometown.

    First, he might like the convenient traffic.

    Second, he can enjoy the view of some famous spots.

    Third, he might worry about the traffic jam.

    其他的大致上沒有問題

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  • 1 decade ago

    People are living longer now for several reasons.

    建議: There are three reasons for living longer.

    Firstly, working space is not close to their hometown.

    建議: First, working place should be near to our hometown.

    Secondly, people enjoy their silent lives cozily.

    建議: Second, guiet environments can for us feel more comfortable.

    Third, there are less restricted rules. People can do want they want.

    建議: Third, there should be less restricted rules. We need to do

    what we want to.

    ...........

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