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? asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我的英文信最佳化一下

原文:

Hi Allan,

Kindly confirm receipt of the attached billing (EDIXOT08-00003 & 02) representing your van charges from Apr-Jun ’08 for both UNION CAPITAL and UNITED UNIVERSAL PARTNERSHIP.

Thank you and for any concern regarding the attached billings, please feel free to send us e-mail.

Regards, Manuel Victorio Integrated Solutions Technology

我回信:

Hi Finance,

About the Invoice No EDIXOT08-00002 ...

Please notice that Invoice number has Duplicate .

Duplicate information such as attachments.

請幫我改改最佳化一下,感覺好像太中式英文了,但又不知如何是好。

3 Answers

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  • 1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    Hi Finance,

    Please see an attachment about a Duplicate Invoice and the number is No EDIXOT08-00002. If there are unclear I made or anything else you noticed. Please let me know, thanks.

    Best Regards

    xxxx

    2008-07-11 16:21:33 補充:

    補習過英文書信的我

    2008-07-11 16:28:46 補充:

    Oh...可以去書局買一本 或上網到博客來找找看

    原文的 不過很簡單 自己讀就可以的

    英文書信很制式的

    Cambridge Universtity press 的

    Company to Company

    A communicative approach to business correspondence in English.

  • 呆子
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    Hi Finance,

    regarding to the Invoice No EDIXOT08-00002 ...,

    it has been Duplicated .

    for more information ,Please refer to the following attachments.*****

  • 1 decade ago

    Hi, Finance

    The invoice number EDIXOT08-00002 is a duplicate invoice.

    Please see the attachments. Should you have any question, don't

    hesitate to contact with me. Thank you very much.

    Sincerely,

    你的名字

    Source(s): 自己
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