Sentence Structure Help?

Is this sentence down below an example of parallelism? My pencil makes the final kick to finish the last ‘c’; the word steadily echoes in the inner recesses of my mind…e-clec-tic. wouldn't it be...right? because in the first part of the sentence the verb is makes and the in the second part of the... show more Is this sentence down below an example of parallelism?

My pencil makes the final kick to finish the last ‘c’; the word steadily echoes in the inner recesses of my mind…e-clec-tic.

wouldn't it be...right?
because in the first part of the sentence the verb is makes and the in the second part of the sentence the verb is echoes.

can anyone help me clarify please?
thanks. :)
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