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Harry Potter experts needed! What is wrong with my fan fiction?
Note: repeat question.
"The Wizarding Floor" is this week's chapter, starring our favorite magical weapon of all time!
BUT, I need true HP experts who will point out everything in my story that contradicts the Harry Potter books or any other faults.
Best answer goes to whoever returns here and gives the most well-reasoned criticism on anything they find!
1) I will post a new mini-chapter each Friday.
2) There is no adult content.
3) The story is intended to agree 100% with Rowling's books.
4) This week's chapter is 19 pages - each page is nearly identical in length to a hard cover U.S. HP book page.
5) Two comment entry fields are provided on each page.
6) Scathing criticism welcome.
Thanks, loyal HP fans!
P.S. - major update to chapter 2, thanks to Y!A user criticisms! Thanks - and please, check it out!
- stephanie yLv 41 decade agoFavorite Answer
It's nice but I'm not really in to fan fiction. I like to stick to info about what's actually part of the HP world. Weather or not it's about the actors, Jo, or the movies, that kind of thing.
I think it needs a little more info.