阿海 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

我的英文自傳這樣寫ok嗎~??

大大~~我的英文程度不好

我已經努力把我想表達的意思翻成英文了

拿給同學看一下~他們還是說有點怪

所以想請大大們幫忙看一下~~不知有哪需要改的~~~~

I come from a very happy middle class family. (我來自於於一個快樂的小康家庭)

My father certainly have great influence on me, I always look up to him. (父親對我人生中產生了影響,他一直是我尊敬的對象)

His passion and dedication to his job and family are the best things to us.(他對工作與家庭的熱情與奉獻,是影響我們最深的)

School life was very important for me. (對我來說學校的生活是很重要的)

I not only made many friends, but also gained many different valuable experiences. (我不僅交到很多朋友,更獲得許多不同的寶貴經驗)

Especially, when we were doing the seminar, (尤其是我們在做專題討論時)

I learned how to work and communicate well with a multi-cultural and diverse work force. (在與同學來自於不同領域間,我學到如何去做好它與表達出意見)

Until now, those were very useful experiences for me and my future job.(一直到現在這些對我及未來的工作,都是很有用的經驗)

When I studied at University,

I learned the importance and necessity of creation. (我學習到重要且必需的創新)

I believe the training and experiences which I gained from University becomes an asset for my future career.(我相信在學校獲得的訓練與經驗對於我未來的職涯都是寶貴的資產)

I consider myself to be active and friendly and have positive work attitude (我認為我自己在工作態度上是一個有主動力且友善的)

and be willing and able to work diligently without supervision. (並且可以在沒有主管的監視下我會勤奮的工作)

I am an energetic, hardworking person. (我是個積極且努力工作的人)

I always give my best and will apply my self to any job that I get. (我會努力做到最好並且在工作學習過程中分享我所獲的東西)

If you would like to know more about my ability, I can be available for an interview at any time convenient to you.(如果你想要認識我更多的話,我可以跟您約個時間面試。)

Sincerely yours

Update:

感謝 laokoko 大大的幫忙~~

讓我英文自傳語法與內容得以更完整~

感恩~謝謝您

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  • Pogo
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago
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    I come from a very happy middle class family. (OK)

    My father certainly has great influence on me, I always look up to him.

    His passion and dedication to his job and family are both the most influential things to us.

    School life was very important for me.

    I not only made many friends, but also gained many different valuable experiences, especially when we were at the seminars. (專題討論複數吧?)

    I learned how to work and communicate well with students of diverse backgrounds. (在與同學來自於不同領域間,我學到如何去做好它與表達出意見)

    Until now, those have been very useful experiences for me and my future jobs.(一直到現在這些對我及未來的工作,都是很有用的經驗)

    When I studied at University,

    I learned the importance and necessity of creation. (我學習到重要且必需的創新) 這句是什麼意思? You learned it from school? Or 那是你的感想? 什麼創新? Apply your knowledge to work?

    I believe the training and experiences I gained from college are important assets for my future career.(我相信在學校獲得的訓練與經驗對於我未來的職涯都是寶貴的資產)這句跟上面有一點重複意思了吧? (兩句都對你future career 很重要?)

    I am friendly and I consider my work attitude to be positive and self-starting, and I am willing to work diligently without supervision.

    I am aggressive and hardworking.

    I will do my best and would share my knowledge with people from work.

    If you are interested and would like to know more about what I am capable of, I will be available for an interview at your convenience.

    Sincerely yours

    Source(s): laokoko
  • 1 decade ago

    may be it is both way, but I do use "Sincerely yours" more often.

  • 1 decade ago

    The last sentense is 'your sincerely' .

  • 1 decade ago

    你可以去下面那個部落格看看,他上面有發表很多求職中英自傳、履歷表及推甄中英自傳、自我介紹、求學、推甄備審資料的範例,還有一些面談面試的要領,你都可以參考喔!你若有問題也可以發問或是留言!

    部落格網址: http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/supercanada2007/

    Source(s): 很實用的求職、翻譯、面試部落格
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