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happy asked in 社會及文化語言 · 1 decade ago

改善英文行動十七. 希望大家盡力幫忙

希望大家盡力指出我錯處

狠心批改,不必留情.

並且希望說明錯的原因

感謝

Do you have a mobile phone?

No, I have not a mobile phone. To be honest, I don't feel embarrassed when I tell that to my friends because a mobile phone is no used to me. Nowadays, many teenagers forget the meaning of the mobile phone, they buy a new mobile phone in order to catch on the trend. Also, some teenagers are hard to control themselves such as send a lot of message, chat with friends in a whole day etc.

So, a lot of money is wasted. Causing this situation, I think the teenagers are spoiled by thier parents.

Lastly, I hope teenagers can be considerate before they buy a new phone.

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  • Yuen
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago
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    [錯誤一]

    No, I have not a mobile phone. 錯

    No, I do not have a mobile phone. 正確

    I have = 我有

    I do not have = 我沒有

    ** I have not 係當一個動詞既時式黎用 (現在完成式) 另一樣野來的

    例如: I have not had lunch. 我還未吃飯

    如果用 I have not a mobile phone, 即係, 我還未手機? 唔通!

    [錯誤二]

    when I tell that to my friends because a mobile phone is no used to me. 錯

    when I tell my friends about it because mobile phones are no use to me. 對

    - tell that to my friends 港式英語

    - tell my friends about it 正確

    a mobile phone is no used to me 有文法同語法上問題

    你係想講所有手提電話對你無用, 不是單單* 一部 * 手機, 所以,

    手機要眾數s , 改成 mobile phones are....

    另外, no used 點解use會變左過去式 ?? 變番現在式就okay了!

    如果想直接一點, 可將no use 改成 useless[形容詞,沒有用的意思]

    [錯誤三]

    -forget the meaning of the mobile phone 錯

    -neglect(忽視) the meaning of the mobile phones 對

    青少年不是忘記了手機的意思, 佢地只係忽視左當中的意義!!

    mobile phone 加 *s* , 因為眾數 !!

    [錯誤四]

    catch{流行) on the trend 錯

    follow(追隨) the trend 對

    catch on 解流行, 係一個詞組來的,

    你話 catch on the trend 即係話青少年流行時尚??? 解唔通,

    用番 follow, 追隨時尚 會好好多!!!

    [錯誤五]

    some teenagers are hard to control themselves such as send a lot of message,

    chat with friends in a whole day etc. [錯]

    some teenagers cannot control themselves. They send a lot of messages and chat with their friends all day long [對]

    有些年青人很難去控制自己 *語法有問題*

    你一係就話佢地覺得控制自己好難,

    一係就好似我果句咁話 *不能控制自己* 直接了當

    另外, 你唔駛講 such as 後面唔跟 etc , 我直情唔要such as 呢 d 詞, 你得兩個例子, 不如唔好such as 喇, a lot of message 眾數加番 個 * s*

    in a whole day = 在整天入面

    什麼叫在整天入面?? 我地做乜野都係在一日入面做架喇,,,

    用all day long 就有整天的意思。

    [錯誤六]

    請刪去causing this situation

    引致這個情況是因為青少年被父母寵壞了 [語法有問題]

    你應該話 A lot of money is wasted because the teenagers are

    spoiled by their parents.

    [錯誤七]

    呢個唔算係錯誤,

    can be * more * considerate 可以起強調作用!

    同埋 teenagers 可以用代名詞 - they

    *** 對唔住我無位打哂改左篇文落黎, 你可以 E-mail 我, 再見!

    Source(s): myself and google.
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