阿修 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

修改文法以及用字~急!!

Conventional medicine is most common method of treatment it can be traced back to the ancient fifth century B.C Greece. Surgical techniques have improved over the last century. Nowadays many people choose first when they has the life in danger or illness. For example When I was get a cold my mother take me to hospital looks at the doctor then I told to doctor about my symptoms I had terrible headache a sore throat and a fever then the doctor give me prescription to pharmacy get the medicine. And I asked my doctor has any special instruction? He said yes, these tablets will make you drowsy and you should avoid driving and doing the dangerous work in addition if your fever doesn’t come down within 24 hours you should come back hospital right away. Luckily when I after takes the tablets the symptom gradually relaxes. Although it has very useful but opposite it has injury to our body. Today in this world has many health treatments what the method you will try? But for me any method of treatments all has merit and shortcoming that most importantly do not injury to the body also achieve the effect the treatment can be best.

Update:

不要線上字典翻的唷!!

謝謝~~

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  • ?
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    1 decade ago
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    原句是黑色,藍色是建議加或改的部分,(粉紅色)是建議刪的部分.綠色是說明.

    Conventional medicine is most common method of treatment it can be traced back to the ancient fifth century B.C Greece. 這兩句可以合併,most作為最高級時要加the,第五世紀是在古代,可不用ancient.

    Conventional medicine, which can be traced back to Greece in the fifth century, is the most common method of treating disease.

    Surgical techniques have improved over the last century.

    Nowadays many people choose first when they has the life in danger or illness. choose需要受詞,they是多數,要用have.

    Nowadays many people choose the conventional medicine when they are ill or their lives are in danger.

    For example, w(W)hen I (was) go(e)t (a) cold my mother took(ake) me to a hospital to see a (looks at the) doctor. (then) I told (to) the doctor (about) my symptoms such as (I had terrible) headache, (a) sore throat and (a) fever. T(t)hen the doctor ga(i)ve me a prescription and we (to pharmacy) go(e)t the medicine from the pharmacy. 要注意動詞時式與及物/不及物動詞.

    (And) I asked my doctor for (has any) special instructions and (H)he said that (yes, these tablets will) the medicine would make me (you) drowsy and (you) I should avoid driving and doing (the) dangerous works. (i)In addition, if (your) my fever d(oes)idn't come down within 24 hours (you) I should (come) go back to the hospital right away. Luckily, (when I) after I took(ake) the tablets the symptoms gradually (relaxes) disappeared. 在說自己的故事時盡量用第一人稱.

    Although the medicine (it ha)is very useful, (but opposite) it (has injury to) could damage (或用injure) our bodies(y). (Today in this world has many) Among the health (treatments) care methods available in the world today, which one (what the method you) will you try? (But for) To me (any) every method (of treatments all) has merits and shortcomings. Merit和shortcoming應不只一個. (that most importantly do) The best ones would not injure(y to) the body (also) but achieve the treatment effectively( the treatment can be best).

  • 1 decade ago

    最佳解答,太強了~

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