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Dear Mom:

I am your beloved son, Peter.Being your son for so many years , you must have no idea how much you have inspired me. I still remeber when I was yong ,you had to work a full-time job and attend to me after a days work. You did almost all of the housework ; however, you were always willing to read stories before I went to bed even though you had already burned out. I supposed it is your love to me that make you such a deligent , determined , considerate , and preserverent woman. It seemed that whatever difficulties in front of you would be nothng. You set a model which necourages me to contribute myself not only to familied but the whole society. You taught me to be loving .without your guidiance, I can never feeling so much love in my heart.

I want to tell you that I am grateful for everything you did for me, and I promise it will pay off. Since you have brought me up , it is time you relaxed and enjoyed a care-free life. At last ,thank you for everything.

Your truly

Peter

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  • Elisa
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
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    You don’t have many grammar errors. A lot of them are just typos. Good job.

    (1) I would recommend changing the 2nd sentence to: You must have no idea how much you have inspired me since I was born.

    => Confusing subjects: (I) Being your son for so many years, you must have no idea how much you have inspired me.

    For example: (I) Being away from home so long, I am nervous to be back.

    (2) I still remember when I was young, you had to work full time and attend to me after a day’s work.

    (3) I supposed it is your love to me that makes you such a diligent, determined, considerate, and perseverant woman.

    => your love to me is uncountable so use singular verb.

    (4) It seemed that whatever difficulties in front of you would be nothing.

    (5) You set a model which encourages me to contribute myself not only to families but the whole society.

    => a model is singular noun, so use singular verb.

    (6) Without your guidance, I can never feel so much love in my heart.

    => can + intransitive verb.

    (7) Since you have brought me up, it is time you relax and enjoy a care-free life.

    => use present tense to state something from now to the future.

    2008-06-23 23:05:17 補充:

    Perseverant is an adjective.

    It is time that you do it.

    = It is time you do it.

    It is time that you decide whether to go or not.

    It is time you decide whether to go or not.

    口頭上THAT可省略

    Source(s): Myself. Went abroad at age 11. With 32 years experience speaking and writing English. Tutored English as an Undergrad. A project manager in the US since 1992.
  • 1 decade ago

    preserverent should be replaced with perseverant,

    我記得文法書上都是寫 It is time that S. Ved 或 It is time that S. should V.

    難到這裡的THAT不可省略嗎

  • 1 decade ago

    通常

    英文文章逗點點在句子的尾端跟句子沒有空格

    然後逗點後面需要兩個空白鍵 在接下去 句點之後也是^^

    寫的不錯 我喜歡

    既然開頭是現在式 就要盡量把所有句子放到現在式

    雖然讀的時候不會太在意 但是盡量吧

    Dear Mom:

    I am your beloved son, Peter. Being your son for so many years, you must have no idea how much you have inspired me. I still (remember) when I was (young), you had to work (for) a full-time job and (take care of) me after a (day of) work. You (have done) almost all the houseworks, (and still) willing to read stories before I (go) to bed even though you (have had) already (being tired and exhausted). I supposed it is your love to me that (makes) you such a (diligent), determined, considerate, and preserverent(我沒看過這字 是想要說保護地嗎) woman. It (seems) that (any obstacles that's standing) in front of you (becomes nothing). You set a model which (encourages) me to contribute myself not only to (families) but the whole society (as well). You taught me to be loving, and without your (guidance), I can never (filling) so much love in my heart.

    I want to tell you that I am grateful for everything you (have done) for me, and I promise it will (be paid) off. Since you (have had raised) me up (single handed), it is time (for) you (to be) relaxed and enjoyed a care-free life. At last ,(I) thank you for everything.

    Your truly

    Peter

    Source(s): do re me
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