Yuanchi asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請英文很好很好的人幫我看看我英文這樣翻可不可以~文法對不對!

老鷹是世界上壽命最長的鳥類

牠的一生可以長達七十年

不過要活那麼長的壽命,

牠在四十歲的時候,

必須做出一個困難卻非常關鍵的決定。

因為當老鷹活到四十歲時,

牠的爪子開始老化,

無法有效地抓住獵物,

牠的喙也漸漸變得又長又彎,

幾乎碰到胸膛。

而牠的翅膀也因為羽毛長得又濃又厚,

所以變得十分沈重,

也使得飛翔更加吃力。

這時候的老鷹只有兩種選擇:

等死,

或是一個十分痛苦的更新過程。

牠必需在懸崖上築一個特別的巢,

並且停在那裡,

不得飛翔,

進行長達一百五十天的痛苦過程。

老鷹首先用牠的喙敲擊岩石,

直到完全脫落,

然後靜靜地等待新的喙長出來。

接著,

牠再用新長出來的喙,

把原來的爪子,

一根一根地拔出來。

然後當新的爪子長出來後,

再把自己身上又濃又密的羽毛一根根地拔掉。

五個月後,

新的羽毛長出來了,

老鷹重新得力又開始飛翔,

再過三十年展翅上騰的歲月。

The eagle is the bird which has the longest life in the world.

It can live to the age of 70.

But if it want to live long ,it has to make a difficult important decission,when it forty years

old.

Because it lives to the age of 40,its paws start to get oldand can't catch the game

effectively.

Its beak also become longer and benter step by step and almost touches its chest.

Its feather becomes very very thick so its wings become very heavy.

That makes more difficult to fly.

At this time,the eagle only has two choices to choose.

Wait for dying or come through an extremely painful renewal process.

It has to build a special nest on the cliff, stays in there, must not fly and starts the

painful process one hundred fifty days.

First, eagle uses its beak to beat the rock until its beak ablates completely.

And then wait for the new beak grow.

Second,it used the new beak to pull up the primitive claws .

When the new claws grow,it uses that to pull up the thick feather on his own body.

After five months,the new feather grows.

The eagle can fly on the sky,and leads a better thirty years life.

拜託了^^

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  • amigo
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    1 decade ago
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    老鷹是世界上壽命最長的鳥類

    The eagle has the longest life-span of its species in the world.

    牠的一生可以長達七十年

    It can live as long as 70 years in its entire life.

    不過要活那麼長的壽命,牠在四十歲的時候,必須做出一個困難卻非常關鍵的定。

    However, in order to live that long (or: this long), it has to make a

    very difficult but crucial decision at the age of 40.

    因為當老鷹活到四十歲時,牠的爪子開始老化,無法有效地抓住獵物,

    For at the age of 40, its talons start to age and can’t effectively

    grab any of its prey.

    牠的喙也漸漸變得又長又彎,幾乎碰到胸膛。

    Besides, its beak gradually grows, becoming so long and so curved

    (or: so bent) that it almost reaches its chest.

    而牠的翅膀也因為羽毛長得又濃又厚,所以變得十分沈重,也使得飛翔更加吃力。

    And at the same time its wings become heavy covered (or: loaded)

    with thick feathers, making it even harder to fly and hover.

    這時候的老鷹只有兩種選擇:

    Now, the eagle has only two options to choose from.

    等死,或是一個十分痛苦的更新過程。

    Waiting to die or going through an extremely painful rebirth process.

    牠必需在懸崖上築一個特別的巢,並且停在那裡,不得飛翔,進行長達一百五十天的痛苦過程。

    It has to build a special nest on a cliff and stay put there without

    having any slightest idea of flying and hovering before going

    through the painful 150-day rebirth process.

    老鷹首先用牠的喙敲擊岩石,直到完全脫落,然後靜靜地等待新的喙長出來。

    The eagle first has to knock its aged beak against the rock until it

    completely breaks off , and then waits quietly for the new beak to

    grow back.

    接著,牠再用新長出來的喙,把原來的爪子,一根一根地拔出來。

    Then it uses its new beak to pluck its aged talons one by one.

    然後當新的爪子長出來後,再把自己身上又濃又密的羽毛一根根地拔掉。

    After the new talons are fully grown, it plucks its thick and dense

    feathers one at a time [註: 有時也會喙掉兩三根吧! one or several

    at a time]

    五個月後,新的羽毛長出來了,老鷹重新得力又開始飛翔,再過三十年展翅上騰的歲月。

    Five months later, when the new feathers are fully grown, the eagle

    regain its strength as well as energy, and start to fly and hover again

    high in the sky for another thirty years (or: for thirty years more).

    ================

    Hope you will find my translation useful and helpful.

    Good luck!

    jmclin8@yahoo.com.tw

    2008-06-16 20:15:06 補充:

    Hi, 米漿

    請注意專業用字:

    1) talons (not: paws, which are of cats, bears, etc.)

    2) grab (not: catch)

    3) fly and hover

    4) knock its beak against the rock until it breaks off

    5) pluck (not: extract or pull up)

    Is 媛淇 your classmate?

    Wish you all luck!

    jmclin8@yahoo.com.tw

    Source(s): myself + expert definition, myself
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  • River
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    確定Thomas 是用翻譯軟體所翻 錯誤百出 不宜採用

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  • 1 decade ago

    老鷹是世界上壽命最長的鳥類

    The eagle has the longest life-span in the bird kindom.

    牠的一生可以長達七十年

    It could live up to the age of 70 years old.

    不過要活那麼長的壽命,牠在四十歲的時候,必須做出一個困難卻非常關鍵的定。

    However in order to has such a long life-span, it has to make a very difficult and painful decision at the age of 40.

    因為當老鷹活到四十歲時,牠的爪子開始老化,無法有效地抓住獵物,

    This is because at the age of 40, it craw started to age and can’t effectively catch it prey.

    牠的喙也漸漸變得又長又彎,幾乎碰到胸膛。

    And it beak will gradually become so long that it will be almost touching it chest

    而牠的翅膀也因為羽毛長得又濃又厚,所以變得十分沈重,也使得飛翔更加吃力。

    In addition the feather on it wings will be too thick making too heavy for flying.

    這時候的老鷹只有兩種選擇:

    Now, the eagle has only 2 choice:

    等死,或是一個十分痛苦的更新過程。

    Waits for death or a very painful renewal process

    牠必需在懸崖上築一個特別的巢,並且停在那裡,不得飛翔,進行長達一百五十天的痛苦過程。

    It has to build a special nest on the cliff and stay there to go through a painful process for more than 150 day without flying.

    老鷹首先用牠的喙敲擊岩石,直到完全脫落,然後靜靜地等待新的喙長出來。

    First of all, the eagle has to strike the rock with it beak till it totally drop off and quietly wait for new beak to grow.

    接著,牠再用新長出來的喙,把原來的爪子,一根一根地拔出來。

    Then it has to uses it new beak to extract all it craw one by one.

    然後當新的爪子長出來後,再把自己身上又濃又密的羽毛一根根地拔掉。

    After which, when the craw is fully developed it has to extract all it thick and dense feather.

    五個月後,新的羽毛長出來了,老鷹重新得力又開始飛翔,再過三十年展翅上騰的歲月。

    Five months later when the feather is fully growth, the eagle regain it strength and started to fly again and spend another 30 years in the sky.

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  • Nana
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    翻譯軟體的爛作

    這樣也能混到實習生(原本是研究生 採用率只有20幾% 被降級)

    天下英雄豪傑.

    眼睛放亮一點

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  • Thomas
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    The eagle is the longest birds of life-span in the world

    Its life can be as long as 70 years

    So long life-span that but should live,

    It, during 40 years old,

    Must make one difficulty but key decision very.

    Because when the eagle lives to the age of 40,

    Its claw wears out at the beginning,

    It is unable to catch preys effectively,

    Its beak has become long and also curved gradually too,

    Nearly touch the chest.

    And wing of it too because feather grow thick and also thick,

    Become Shen in weight very much,

    It is more straining so as to hover too.

    The eagle at this time has two kinds of choices only:

    Wait for death,

    Whether or a very painful renewal process.

    It must build a special nest at the cliff,

    Where and stop,

    Can't hover,

    Carry on the 150 days -long painful course.

    The eagle beats the rock with its beak at first,

    Until totally coming off,

    Then wait for the new beak to grow silently.

    Then,

    It is and then with the beak that grows newly,

    An original claw,

    One for one is pulled out.

    Then after the new claw grow,

    On one's body thick dense feather a root pull out also oneself again.

    Five months later,

    The new feather grows,

    The eagle is capable and beginning to hover again,

    After 30 years.

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  • 1 decade ago

    可是我從頭到尾都打單數耶

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  • 1 decade ago

    It應該要改成they芭 = )

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