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Making a new friend sometimes might be arduous for people who are

vary shy. Lack of interpersonal communication can be the paramount

issue for them. In this situation, they might consider to go to some

places where people mostly hang out together. For instance,

ceremonies and pub seem to be the two places where people would

like to go.

The first impression is another step to make new friends. An action of

kindness such as greeting will be more likely to make a new friend

rather than a look of hatred. A comely appearance is another way to

impress people. Besides first impression, a good temperament is

principal. A person who has numerous friends depends on his or her

personality. People prefer generous disposition other than selfish

ones. Therefore, a different temperament can absorb various people.

I like make friends, but I am often shy of anyone I don'tknow,

therefore, I also afeard to talk with stranger. However, I have a lot of

friends, you may ask me how can I make them? Tell you, I like help

the person who need help, therefore, I help my friend to do

something. Then we become good friends.

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    Making a new friend sometimes might be arduous for people who are

    very shy. Being lack of interpersonal communication can be the most important issue for them. In this situation, they might consider to go

    to some places where people mostly hang out together. For instance,

    ceremonies(?) and pub seem to be the two places where people

    would like to go.

    The first impression is one step to make new friends. An action of

    kindness such as greeting will be more likely to make a new friend

    rather than a look of hatred. A comely appearance is another way to impress people. Besides(=In addition to) the first impression, a good

    temperament is crucial. The reason why a person who has numerous friends depends on his or her personality. Therefore, a person who hasa wonderful temperament can befriend various people.

    I like to make friends, but I am always shy to anyone. I don't know why I also afraid to talk with strangers. However, I have a lot of

    friends, perhaps you can ask me how I can make them. I like to help

    person who need help, and I also help my friend(to) do

    something. Then we become good friends.

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