貝卡 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

英文作文 文法和用字上的問題

Take a shower day or night

When it comes to take a shower, is not strange to people, we do it everyday. As to take a shower, there is a big knowledge. As far as the foreigns are concerned, theytake a shower every morning, for they conceive it is necessary to keep polite for other people at outside.They are used to do so. Compared with the Taiwanese, we may wondering why they do not take a shower after going out for all day long. Many Taiwanese can not sleep until thay take a shower.

Opinions to culture shocks are hundreds to thousands. No matter wrong or right, understanding is the beginning for the cultures. As people learned mostly Euripean and America's countries locate the temperate zone, are not like the heat in Taiwan, people go out whole day without sweat. After going home,changing the clothes, the body is still dry and clean. We can not but talk about perfume are common in many countries. The invention of perfume may explianed the reason why the foreigns do not take a shower before sleep or take a shower in the morning.

But for the Taiwanese, the high density and the awful environment have the full reason for us to take a shower after home. I believed that the foreigns in Taiwan may change their habits result from the weather in Taiwan.

Now, people get understanding about the factors of only a habit. We should look on the bright side and be positiveto the sifferences. In a exploded information world, people should take it easy for culture shocks. We should give our approval.

Update:

請問一下locate不是及物動詞嗎?

那還要加on這個介係詞嗎?

你回答得很棒,謝謝你.

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  • 天道
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    1 decade ago
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    When it comes to take a shower

    when it comes to這個片語後面不可以直接接動詞,因為不是你想的to+V,它的to並非不定詞的功用,所以是when it comes to taking a shower.當然這片語可以直接接名詞、形容詞和代名詞,when it comes to his mother,he can not but burst into tears( or burst out crying).

    we do it everyday

    要注意的是everyday和every day的差別,前者是形容詞,後者是副詞,在此句中很明顯是用到副詞,所以應是用every day才正確。

    As to take a shower

    在此as當when來說,沒有主詞在這子句裡時要用現在分詞,變成as taking a shower。

    As far as the foreigns are concerned,

    foreign是形容詞,你要說的是外國人應用foreigner。

    for they conceive it is necessary to keep polite for other people at outside.

    outside原本就有(adv.)所以不必加at,而且我覺得加at還有點怪怪的。

    we may wondering why they do not take a shower after going out for all day long.

    may是助動詞,和can 、must、should......一樣,後面動詞一定要是原形動詞。

    Many Taiwanese can not sleep until they take a shower.

    這句話的語意怪怪的,很多台灣人不睡覺,直到洗澡時(很多台灣人直到洗澡時才睡覺)= =我覺得Many Taiwanese always want to take a shower before going to sleep.比較好。

    As people learned mostly Euripean and America's countries locate the temperate zone.

    裡面的locate是位於哪裡的意思,所以要用被動語態,還有learn我不知道為什麼你要用過去式,learn代表知道後面所描述的事實,不管是真理、表事實,除非現在被已否定,否則都用現在式。As people learn mostly European and American countries are located in temperate zone.

    We can not but talk about perfume are common in many countries.

    你應該知道介係詞後面接的子句不可以有動詞吧?可以改成We can not but talk about perfume which (or that) is common(or popular) in many countries.

    The invention of perfume may explianed the reason why the foreigns do not take a shower before sleep or take a shower in the morning.

    may be explaned(要注意別跟maybe搞混了喔~),還有foreigners~

    But for the Taiwanese, the high density and the awful environment have the full reason for us to take a shower after home.

    but for 有"要不是"的意思,如:but for your help,we would be in big trouble.,full reason應該是複數吧?如果是的話就要記得加s喔,還有請問after home是什麼意思?after going home嗎?

    2008-06-14 10:21:02 補充:

    people get understanding about the factors of only a habit.

    我是覺得用just代替only會比較好。

    We should look on the bright side and be positive to the sifferences.

    2008-06-14 10:21:14 補充:

    sifference是什麼?是不是difference?

    In a exploded information world,

    exploded有以爆炸完了的意味,用exploding 才有持續的意味,所以用In an exploding information world會比較好,還有要注意a和an,這也是常常被人忘記的。

    或許些錯誤文法我沒有發現的話請見諒~

    2008-06-17 16:52:49 補充:

    locate 是及物動詞沒錯,所以當你是表主動的時候後面不用加介係詞。但如果是表被動時,後面會加介係詞

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