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請各位英文高手 幫我改下列這一小段文章 包括文法句構還有邏輯!!感恩 After the first contact with computers, I realized what a powerful status Microsoft got in information technology. It soon occurred to me that as long as I had been rich like Bill Gates, I would have been the happiest person in the world for fulfilling my whole dreams above.... show more 請各位英文高手
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包括文法句構還有邏輯!!感恩

After the first contact with computers, I realized what a powerful status Microsoft got in information technology. It soon occurred to me that as long as I had been rich like Bill Gates, I would have been the happiest person in the world for fulfilling my whole dreams above. Nevertheless, it obviously appears that Bill Gates is under pressure more than relaxed, spending most parts of his life thinking about how to maintain his position as a behemoth in the IT industry.
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