荔枝 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

報考應用外語系,請幫忙校正英文自傳~prat 1

以下是我的英文自傳,最近要報考實踐應用外語系,我的文法不太行,已經盡力寫了,請各位高手不吝賜教~謝謝!

My name is XXX. I graduated from Takming College in May 1991. I majored in the Management of Information System. At first, it was not familiar with computer made me hard in studying. But everything went smooth later when I took the positive attitude to face my challenges. In these three years, I learned a lot of skills in Information Technology such as SQL server, UNIX operating system, computer programming, data structure, E-commerce and Web design. Learning Management of Information Technology needs to absorb and learn new knowledge continuously. It also requires analysis and management ability. I realized that the continuous learning is very important to adapt to the fast-changing society. I always obtain new information and learn computer application ability through internet.

I was born in a humble family in Taipei. I live with my mother and my elder sister. My father passed away in Apr. 2002, I loved him from the bottom of my heart. It is hard for me when he left. My parents work hard to support the family. In order to reduce the burden of my parents, I worked in daytime and went to the evening class of Takming college Two-year vocational school. It was a challenge to me in fulltime working and studying simultaneously. My parents taught me to have a good manner and they also respected my opinions. Their generously support was very important in every phase of my career. We are not rich materially, but we are rich spiritually.

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  • Kim
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    1 decade ago
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    My name is xxx. I graduated from Takming College in 1991. I majored in Management of Information System. In the beginning of the course, I struggled with the subject as I was not very familiar with computer studies. I took it as a challenge and with my positive attitude, it helped me to get over these obstacles. After that, everything was smooth-sailiing. During these three years at Takming College, I have learned new skills such as SQL server, UNIX operation system, computer programming, data structure, e-commerce and web design. The course required me to keep up to the current trend and continue to acquire new skills as technology evolves. It also required solid analysis and management skills. Since then I have been updating myself by picking up new skills and applications from sources such as internet.

    I was born in Taipei. I now live with my mother and my elder sister since my father passed away in 2002. I love my father dearly, therefore it was devastating for me when he left us. My parents work hard to support the family. In order to share the burden off my parents' shoulders, I worked during daytime and took evening classes. It was another challenge for me, mentally and physically to cope with full time work during the day and studies at night. My parents taught me to have good manner and they always respect my opinion. I always believe their support was important in every phase of my career. Though we are not wealthy financially but we certainly are in the spiritually sense.

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