珊~ asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

可以請英文強者幫我修改英文自傳內容嗎?

如標題

可以幫我看一下文法是否有錯誤?或句子不通順的地方嗎?

謝謝!!

My name is O O O, I’m 22 years old, and I live in Pingtung city. I will graduate from Department of Finance, X X University in June, 2008. My family has five members, Dad is a laborer, Mom is a housewife, younger sister is a sophomore, and younger brother is the third year student in senior high school, I'm the eldest child in my sibling.

Because I had a fever in the childhood, I became a cerebral palsy patient, but I have much lucky compared to other patients, I didn’t have to use auxiliary to take care of oneself in the life, excepting movement has been slower than normal person, but I certainly requested oneself to achieve the degree which everyman was allowed to achieve, certainly I has not hindered the study opportunity because of the bodily limitation, instead of diligently studied, I maintained active and enthusiastic heart from beginning to end. In growth process, I didn’t have come out top, but I still maintained at the medium above degree, and strove for the good performance with everything;

Update:

下面還有一大段

如有意願者

我會寄到你信箱

在此先謝過!!

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  • 1 decade ago
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    My name is O O O, I’m 22 years old, I live in Pingtung City . I will graduate from Department of Finance in June, 2008 from X X University. My family has five members: My Dad is a laborer, my Mom is a housewife, my younger sister is a sophomore, and younger brother is the third year student in a senior high school, I'm the eldest child in the family.

    Because I had a fever in the childhood, I became a cerebral palsy patient, but I am very lucky to compared to other patients, I don’t have to use auxiliary walking aid to take care of myself in the life, excepting movement will be slower than normal person, but I certainly encouraged myself to achieve the degree which every person was allowed to achieve, certainly I has not hindered the study opportunity because of the bodily limitation, instead, I studied diligently and I maintained active and enthusiastic heart from beginning to end. In growth process, I don’t have come out top, but I still maintained at the medium above degree, and strove for the good performance with everything;

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    Wishes you all the best of luck!!~~

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  • 1 decade ago

    你可以去下面那個部落格看看,之前在部落格上有滿多的中英自傳翻譯範例,你可以去看看!你若有問題也可以發問或是留言!

    部落格網址: http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/supercanada2007/

    滿多求職相關內容發表,如果你需要求學或推甄用的自傳也可以問格主

    Source(s): 很不錯的翻譯部落格網
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