愛雯 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

幫我修改一下作文 24點唷 ~~ 拜託各位了 一天內

然而Jason的爸爸知道車子沒有送俢時,只是等待Jason的到來.但是Jason竟然說謊,讓他爸爸感到悲傷.後來他爸爸說了 ,他生氣的原因不是因為Jason,而是因為他自己.此外,他了解到他做父親的失敗,因為他的兒子竟然不跟他說實話.所以他決定走路回家,想想他這些年到底做錯了什麼.自從這件事以後,Jason在也沒有對他爸爸說謊了.我認為他爸爸太酷了,他處理的很完美.因為普通家庭早就生氣,而且處罰小孩了.

Jason的爸爸竟然忍住生氣,讓兒子自己慚愧,後悔自己說謊.最後我相信Jason的爸爸是一位好父親.

However, Jason's father know the car no serviced , only wait Jason come.But Jason have to lie, let his father sorrowed. Then his father say he is angry,not with he , but with himself. Futhernore, herealize that he have failed as father,because a son who cannoteven tell the turth to him. So he decided to walk home and to think where he gone wrong all these years. After that thing,Jason have never to lied to his father. I see his father so cool, he respond the affair wonderfully. Because the common family mabye angry and punish the child. Actually his father suppress angry and let he feel sorry, repent of his lie. In the end , I believe Jason's father is a good father.

3.關於一個學生有機會去當地美國家庭,第一優點:學生可以有機會把英文學的更好,例如他或她有更多的時間可以跟美國家庭對話.而且可以讓當地人幫助你的發音或文法.第二個優點,可以練習獨立,例如當他們在外地時,每件事都要靠自己,包括食衣住行.雖然他有很多優點,但是也有缺點.第一個缺點是學生可能會思念故鄉.例如他或可能想念家鄉菜,或者想朋友.第二個缺點是當學生在外地的時候,外國人可能會欺負他或她.例如,美國白人常常欺負黑人或黃種人.然而雖然美國家庭友好也有壞,但是我們應該正面思考,假如有機會的話,做好萬全準備,就可以去體驗了.

About a student have the chance to stay with a native American family : The first advantage, a student has an opportunity to learn English well when he or she come to the United States. For example, each time he or she has a conversation with somone in the family,this native speaker can help with his or her pronunciation and grammar. The second advantage, they can pratice independent . For instance, when they on other places , everythings should do by oneself ,including ate ,wear, live ,walk.Even though there maybe more advantages to living with an American family but also have disadvantages. The frist disadvatage, a studenta student maybe nomeland nostalgia . For example, he or she maybe homeland nostalagia.For example , he or she maybe miss traditional food from hometown or miss them friends.

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The second disadvantage,when a student on other places , the foreign person maybe tease he or she .For instance,United States white race always tease bleak race,or

yellow race.However American family have good and bad , but we should positive

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think.Then only you have opportunity stay with a native American family,Prepares for full, you can go to learning experience.

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4.我認為我不會接受網路戀情.第一,網路是虛幻的.例如,網路戀情發生時,他們無法看到對方的真實面貌.他們只能透過文字了解對方.字是充滿魔法的.它可以讓醜男變成英俊的紳士,看起來恐怖的女孩變成迷人的淑女.第二,網路上充滿壞人.

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例如,新聞常常報導網友犯罪.但是網路戀情是存在在這世界的.他們透過電腦認識,交往.所以我是保持中立的.我沒有談過網路戀情,但是我可以想像,如果真的有網路戀情的話,很可能我每天都最在電腦面前了.而且隨著時間會在心理假設

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想像,但是想像是美好的,真正見面的話,可能又是另外一回事了.我喜歡的類型是高、瘦、白。至於如何維持的話,可能就是需要雙方面的經營,畢竟感情不是單方面的付出,是需要溝通和信賴下成長的.

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I see I don't accept cyber love . First the net is airy.For example cyber loves happily,though computer can't give them the "real face". They only through the word with each other. Words have some magic. They make an ugly guy become a

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handsome gentleman,and terrible- looking girl becomes an charming lady.Second,the net fall of the evil man.For instance,the news always record the net friend to commit.But the cyber love is lived in the world ehey through computer to understand

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and relationship.So I see I am maintain neutrality.I don't have cyber love, but I can imagine if I have cyber love , possible I every day in front of the computer for a long time,and with the time can in the psychological supposition imagination, but the

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imagination is wonderful, truly meets the speech, possibly also was other matter .I like the type is high, thin, is white. About how to keep the cyber love, maybe need the double aspect the management.After all the love is not one-way paying,and needs to link up and under the faith grows.

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ps.原本小v要回答的 但是因為時間的問題 so 在貼一次

希望有能能盡快回答 謝謝各位

這是我第一次寫文章耶 我想裡面應該很多錯誤= =

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剩11個小時了= =

汗顏

有人會嘛????

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oh,my god ~

剩5個小時了 = =

人都到那兒去了??

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喔喔 ~~

看起來好像沒人會回答的樣子= =

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to 小瘋可以幫我回答嘛??

我可以把時間延長的= =

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如果可以的話 請全部改

如果不行 請幫我改第四段

謝謝各位

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  • 1 decade ago
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    However, when Jason's father found out that the car did not get fixed, he only waited for Jason to come, but Jason lied to him unexpectedly, which made his father feel sad. Then his father said he is not angry with Jason, but with himself. Furthermore, he realized that he has failed as father because his son does not even tell the truth to him, so he decided to walk home and think what he had done wrong all these years. After that incident, Jason never lied to his father again. I think that his father is very cool, he dealt with the incident perfectly, because in most families they get angry and punish the child. Jason’s father actually suppressed his anger and make Jason feel ashamed and regret about his lie. In the end, I believe Jason's father is a good father.

    2008-05-05 12:52:54 補充:

    About a student having the chance to stay with an American family, The first advantage is: the student will have an opportunity to learn better English. For example, when the student has a conversation with the family, they can help him/her with his/her pronunciation and grammar.

    2008-05-05 12:53:17 補充:

    The second advantage is: they can practice to be independent. For instance, when they’re on their own, everything has to be don by themselves, including food, clothes, living, and transport.

    2008-05-05 12:53:39 補充:

    Even though there are a lot of advantages in living with an American family, there are also the disadvantages. The first disadvantage is: the student may get homesick. For example, he/she might miss the food or his/her friends.

    2008-05-05 12:53:55 補充:

    The second disadvantage is: when the student are in a foreign country, he/she might get bullied by other people that’s is a different race. For example, white American often bullies African Americans or Asians.

    2008-05-05 12:54:07 補充:

    However even though there are both advantages and disadvantages with living with an American family, we should think more positively. If there is a chance, get fully ready and you can experience it.

    2008-05-05 13:17:29 補充:

    4 • I believe that I do not accept having cyber relationships. First, the internet is aerial. For example, when cyber relationships happen, they cannot see each other’s real self.

    2008-05-05 13:17:46 補充:

    They can only understand the other person by words. Words are filled with magic, they can make an ugly guy become a handsome gentleman, and terrible- looking girl becomes a charming lady.

    2008-05-05 13:18:12 補充:

    Second, the internet has a lot of evil people. For instance, the news often report crimes committed by internet friends. But cyber relationships does exist in the world, they know each other through the computer, and have a relationship.

    2008-05-05 13:19:00 補充:

    So I remain neutral. I have never had a cyber relationship, but I can imagine if I have a cyber relationship, I will probably sit in front of the computer every day.

    2008-05-05 13:19:19 補充:

    As time goes by I will have an image in my mind, but the imagination is wonderful, if we really meet, it is probably another matter.

    2008-05-05 13:19:30 補充:

    I like the types that are tall, thin, and pale. About how to keep the cyber relationship, it might need conducting by both. After all love is not one-way paying, it needs communication and trust for it to develop.

  • Jully
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    下次你貼一段就好或許就可以幫你改

    點數很難賺>>>>>

    幫你改一點點好了

    However, when Jason's father found out the car has not been serviced, he waited for Jason's explaination. Yet, Jason disappointed his father by not telling the truth. 意見不能寫太多>>>>>希望你多多加油

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