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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我翻譯以下咖啡調查文章(中翻英)

根據不同的年齡層所做的調查結果顯示出的差異性會反映在咖啡的價格身上,中學時期的學生喝咖啡次數也相對的較少,而大學生們選擇的價位通常是便宜又好喝的咖啡,便利商店和速食店所推出的咖啡也搶攻市場,買咖啡更方便;成人們較喜歡喝價格較高又有氣氛的咖啡廳,除了有更專業的好咖啡可以喝之外,咖啡廳的氣氛讓上班族可以談論公事。另一種有趣的現象顯示,大部份的大學生們在面臨大考時會選擇以咖啡來幫助提神,也有人天天喝,沒有咖啡好像無法有更多精神應付一整天,而40歲以上的成年人喝咖啡次數減少,因為他們意識到天天喝咖啡對健康上有一定的負面影響。

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  • 1 decade ago
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    According to the research result on different age group, the major difference reflects from the price of coffee. Middle school student's drink much less coffee relative to others while university students choose coffes that are cheap and good. Convenient stores and fast food restaurants have also released coffee to gain market share since it becomes more widely available. Adults choose coffee that are more pricey but at better atmosphere cafes. Besides having more professionally made cofee, the atmosphere of the cafe is also important because it allows office deals/talks to take place there. An interesting phoenomenon suggests that most university studetns choose to drink coffee during finals period and many seem to drink it everyday such that without coffee they seem to lack the energy to meet daily work tasks. For adults above age 40, the frequency of coffee drinking declines because they are aware of the negative impacts of drinking coffee everyday on health.

    2008-05-01 22:14:40 補充:

    結果顯示喝咖啡的行為在不同年齡層間確實存在差異。」 =>

    The studies on the behaviour of coffee drinking does differ among different age group.

    「中學生喝咖啡次數原本就少,且不受價格影響」=> The middle school students usually drink less coffee and hence are not subjected to changes in price.

    「另一種有趣的現象顯示」改成「研究中另外還發現」=> The research also found out

    Source(s): myself, myself
  • 情人
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    1 decade ago

    According to different age groups by the survey results show that the difference would be reflected in the price of coffee on secondary school students during the coffee the number is relatively small, while university students choose the price is usually cheaper and drinking coffee , Convenience stores and launched by Susi Dian also attack the coffee market, to buy coffee more convenient as people prefer to drink a climate of higher prices have cafes, in addition to more professional can drink good coffee, the cafe's atmosphere So that workers can talk about official business. Another interesting phenomenon, a majority of university students in the face of Dakao will choose to coffee to help refreshing, some people drink every day, no more coffee seems unable to cope with the spirit of a long day, while adults over the age of 40 Reduction in the number of coffee, because they realize that every day a cup of coffee on health have a certain negative impact.

  • 1 decade ago

    原本想要回答的,但是仔細看看文章,也許根據中文給些意見對你幫助更大。

    我有兩個改寫的方向可供參考:

    一  將開頭改成

       「根據根據不同的年齡層所做的調查

    結果顯示喝咖啡的行為在不同年齡層間確實存在差異。」

       這個開頭只提到存在差異,底下講出怎麼樣的差異都對。

    二  將對中學生的討論移到後面,改成「中學生喝咖啡次數原本就少,且不受價格影響」這樣主題就扣住了。另外把文中「另一種有趣的現象顯示」改成「研究中另外還發現」,並可由此另起一段,作為主要研究結果外的附帶發現

    2008-05-01 13:50:08 補充:

    論文式的文章首重邏輯。文中開宗明義講的是年齡層的差異與咖啡的價格的關係,接著應該要扣緊「年齡層」與「咖啡價格」進一步說明。然而文章中沒有講中學生與咖啡價格的關係,只講到喝咖啡次數;對大學生和成人的討論中除了價格外又提到其他因素像是「好喝」和「方便」(與價格沒有直接關係),「喝咖啡的場所」(有關但是不明顯),在後來的討論又加上「提神」、「健康考量」等因素。認真的讀者如我就會開始思考這個研究的重點到底是什麼

    2008-05-01 13:50:45 補充:

    再提一句

    調查

    和實驗的研究論文對我來說並不是作文,某方面更像是填表,將研究結果以固定的格式發表出來,方便讀者從中提取知識。論文的語言和概念需要十分精準,如同填表不容模擬兩可。希望你現在能感覺到,這樣的目標是值得追求的

  • 1 decade ago

    According to the result of investigation done to the different age groups, different sex will reflect the price of coffee. Middle school students drink coffee less, however university students will select cheap and good taste coffee. The coffee sold in the convenience store and fast food store also attack the marketplace. So buying coffee is more convenient. Adults comparatively like to drink expensive coffee at a coffee shop with good atmosphere. Except having specialized good coffee to drink, the atmosphere of the coffee shop let the working people to discuss their work. The other interesting thing is most of the university students will choose coffee to freshen themselves when they are going sit for the final exam. Also there are people who drink coffee everyday. They can't cope with the whole day if they don't drink coffee. But over 40 adults drink less because it'll influence their health if they drink coffee everyday.

    Source(s): Dr.eye and self
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