國小英文三分鐘演講稿 My favorite class急件
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I am a elementary school student now. There are many different
classes in school, such as Chinese English Math Art and so on. I like
all my classes, but I especially like Art.
Why do I like Art class best? There are three reasons can explain that.
First of all, Art class can make me relex. When I feel upset I can draw
anything that I want. It's a good way let me forget worries. Second,
Art class may stimulate my creativity because Art class hasn't the
standard answer like Englis or Math. You can create art. Just paint
everything you want. Third, Art class let me learn appraisal of art and
the color utilization.
To sum up, Art class is very useful to me. I can learn a lot from Art
class. The most important is that I don't feel boring from Art class
- josephineLv 61 decade agoFavorite Answer
1. 標題有誤！應為My favorite "subject"(科目)，故內文第一段中的class都應改為"subject"，其餘的Art class(藝術課)可改為Art classes(指全部課程)
2. I like all my classes, but I especially like Art.--redundant! Just say "My favorite subject is Art."
3. There are three reasons can explain that.--句型文法不對！Once again, just say "There are three reasons." 不嫌囉嗦就改成 "There are three reasons which can explain it."
4. Art class can make me relex.--change into "Art classes (藝術課) can make me relaxed."
5. Art class may stimulate my creativity because Art class hasn't the standard answer like Englis or Math. --抱歉要打擊一下信心，這種句子是典型的「翻譯軟體式」英文。建議改為Art subject is creative. It doesn't require standard answers as English or Math does.
(PS: Do we require standard answers in English class ALL THE TIME? I don't think so!)
6. Art class let me learn "appraisal" of art and the color utilization.--哪一所國小的藝術人文課已經在教學生「鑑定/估價」書畫了啊？太誇張了吧！用analyzing還差不多。後面也建議改成how to use colors well.
7. "The most important" is that I don't feel boring from Art class
forever. --「最重要的是...」對不對？翻譯軟體又來亂了是唄？你的主詞咧？ 建議改為：The most important "thing" is that I never feel "bored" in Art classes.
如：The music is boring.--這音樂(令人覺得)好無聊。
He feels bored.--他覺得很無聊。Source(s): 小學英師(2005高巿英語演講比賽冠軍指導老師)