This article describes young lady who goes to gym to do the
exercise, and she hopes no one bothers her. The expert teaches
her with smile face and explains that she needs to concentrate while
she is working out.
There is a person who says that she stays with a nice family,
and the owner of the house always cooks a lot of food
which she cannot finish it at all all the time. The expert
suggests that she needs to find a nice way to tell this owner of the
house that she cannot eat that much.
The other person mentions that she just bough a new cell phone.
Once, when the cellpone was ring, other people looked at her with
unhappy faces. The expert suggests that she should turn off the
ring tone into vibration or silence in the public place.
This article teaches us many etiquettes of lives, and people should
learn how to communicate with others in order to solve the
I feel I have learned a lot from this article.
2008-04-15 07:33:45 補充：
Correction: the cell phone was ringing,
Correction: She should turn off the cell phone into vibration or silence in the public places.
2008-04-16 01:39:08 補充：
小優: "Another audience says: she stayed with nice........"
audience means people who listen to other people say, like People listen to the lecturer's speech, and those people are audiences to the leacturer. Therefore, you use the audience in your sentence which is not proper way to put it.
2008-04-16 01:40:10 補充：
In this writing, you try to talk about three people should learn how to communicate with others when they face unplesant situations. I think you should divide into three paragraphs which makes reader understand what you try to say about this article, and put more details in each example.