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This article describes young lady go to gym to exercise,
she don't hope that someone bothers , so the expert teaches her
just smile and explain that you need to concentrate when you’re
working out. Another audience says: she stayed with nice host family, but host always loaded too much food, she couldn’t eat it all,
The expert suggests her can polish the method for talking
The third audience says she got the new cell phone, but the ring tone
let some people dirty looks, The expert suggests that she turns off
a ring tone in the public place.

This article teaches us many etiquettes of lifes , and uses conversation
teach the audience how to work out a problem,
I feel this article are very interesting and very helpful!
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