小孟 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

英文專題~關於汽車旅館的問題幫我解答修正好嗎?謝謝尼

我的專題題目是汽車旅館,給教授看了之後有很多錯誤~而我又不知道錯在哪裡//?/如有學者看到~請救救我吧!幫我解答修正好嗎?謝謝尼~十分感謝歐!

13. What’s yours marketing strategy will be to persuade customers?

那請問您們會以何種行銷策略來挽回客源?

We respect guests, if guests are not satisfied to service attitude or facilities, we will use lose price or advantage ways to customers’ satisfaction deal with attitude.

我們以客為尊,如房客對於服務態度或設備不滿意,我們會以折價卷或優待等方式,給予房客滿意的處理態度。

In the same business competition, we can compare the facility service attitude environment and room tidy ways by these marketing strategies will persuade customers to stay unless in the bad competition we can in the price discount.

在同行競爭中,我們會去比較設備、服務態度、環境、房間整潔等方式,以這些行銷策略來挽住客源,除非在非常劣勢的競爭中,我們才會在價格中有所折扣優惠。

And in white Valentine’s Day or seven festivals to belong romantic festival, we provide to customers special advantage activity about rest or live.

而在白色情人節或七夕等一些節日,我們會給於休息或入住的房客特定的優惠活動。

14. Now the motels use the chain method to operate, then it will continue use the chain way operate or use the union way?

目前貴館以連鎖模式經營,那請問在未來會繼續以連鎖方式經營,還是以加盟方式呢?

We are Stockholder Company.

我們是股東企業。

Now we are not considering union problem yet, because we are Stockholder Company, in the funds side sufficient.

目前還不考慮到加盟問題,因是股東企業,在資金方面充足。

Now we have purchase California motel in the Da-Ya Rd., we are not exclude will change name is her-fong in the future.

目前我們有收購大雅路的加州汽車旅館,未來不排除將會改名為禾楓汽車旅館。

15. Which counties do you want to develop?

請問您們接下來有想往哪個縣市拓展嗎?

Every counties are possible develop in Taiwan. So far, it’s possible to establish motel in Hualien or Ilan. But now we are not considering building motel in Outside Island, we want to establish good base.

在台灣每個縣市都有可能拓展,以目前而言,有可能在花蓮或一蘭都有機會再設立會館。

Update:

如有學者看到的話,可以幫我做文法,時態,句型的修改嗎/?謝謝!

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  • KH.
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    老實講. 用改的不如我重寫 . 你參考一下就好...再自己改一下吧??

    13:

    We take our business seriously. To respond to complain or dissatisfactory of the customer, we offer discounts and coupons to amend our negligence.

    To respond to the rivalry and competition in the business, we will come up with better marketing strategy in terms of facility, service quality, environment, and cleanness to retain our customers. We do not participate in price war (we don’t cut prices) unless the competition is too fierce.

    Also, during special events such as the Valentine or the White Valentine days, we will host unique activities in our premises for celebrators.

    14:

    We are private owned company for now. (Of course, there are a few shareholders who hold stocks)

    Since we have sufficient fund, we do not consider the franchise operation.

    We have purchased the California Motel on Ta-Ya road, and we are considering changing the name to Her-fong in the future.

    15:

    We do not limit the develop plan by geographic aspects. Currently, we are evaluating the opportunities of establishing a branch in Hualien or Ilan.

    2008-04-22 08:20:55 補充:

    Correction:

    We do not limit our development plan "to" geographic aspects...

    2008-04-22 08:25:34 補充:

    股東企業: 有兩種. 我個人覺得你是個人企業. 私人募股的就叫 private company.

    如果是上市的公司,要用 public company.

    如果是加盟的意思. 你應該用franchise 取代union

    拓展 ....要用 expand, expansion 意義較符合你的需要

    2008-04-22 08:32:58 補充:

    基本上我不對你的"內容"作修正.你的 business plan合不合理會不會賺錢不在我的考慮中

    Source(s): me
  • wemark
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    就中文ㄉ解釋沒有您們這種說法ㄉ.如果是答案ㄉ話你應該是要發表你自己ㄉ想法吧.因為如果要挽救一家汽車旅館.上述ㄉ答案應該是沒辦法挽救起來ㄉ.

  • 1 decade ago

    我覺得你的用字和文法方面問題滿多的

    如果你要這方面的修正

    我可以幫忙

    不過如果你想要修正的部份是你的答案

    我個人覺得你的構想是可行的

    不太需要修改

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