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Yaya asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我修正英文句子的錯誤(急............)

1. His mother can't prevent him form chat on the Internet last night.

2. Fiood in the mountains, and hurrecanes and typhoons is a cause

to landslide.

3. I think the commonest disasters in the last century are tornados,

not volcsnoss.

4. The scientist predict 3 years ago that a dead catastrophe would

happen today.

5. Catatrophe cause harm and have a impact on people life.

6. You must to watching out to destructive tornadoes when you

driving in Kansas during a storm.

請大家幫我一下~很急!!今天就要了 

 謝謝~

Update:

抱歉~第3題有打錯

volcsnoss → volcanoss

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  • 1 decade ago
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    1. His mother couldn't prevent him from chatting on the internet last

    night.

    2. Flood, hurricane, and typhoons cause erosion.

    3. I think the common disaster in the last century was tornado not

    the volcanoes.

    4. The scientist predicted a major catastrophe would

    happen three years ago.

    5. Catastrophe causes harm,which impacts on people's lives.

    6. You must watch out for destructive tornadoes while you

    drive in Kansas.

    2008-04-13 11:58:13 補充:

    1. Cannot--should use "couldn't" because it's past tense.

    3. we nomally don't say flood in the mountian---Flood flowing through the mountain

    4. dead catastrophe....that feels worng..i perfer using "a major catastrophe causes people's death"

    2008-04-13 12:03:44 補充:

    4. Correction: "Three years ago, the scientist preditcted a major catastrophe causes people's death that may happen today. "

    2008-04-13 12:14:07 補充:

    6. Watch out for + Adj . ( destructive is Adj), therefore, you cannot use "watch out to"

    2. No "S" -typhoon---sorry for mistyped. The sentence should be:

    Flood, hurricane, and typhoon cause erosion. or

    Floods(flowing through mountains), hurricanes, and typhoons cause erosion.

    2008-04-13 13:28:00 補充:

    5. Correction: Catastrophe causes harm, which makes a great impact on people's lives.

    6. Correction: You must watch out for the destructive tornadoes while you

    drive in Kansas

    2. Correction:Floods flowing through mountains, hurricanes and typhoons cause soil erosion.

    Sorry for mistyped...

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  • Elisa
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    #1 Sigma's answer is better with only one typo, which Peter pointed out.

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  • 1 decade ago

    Sigma的第4句

    The scientist predicted 3 years ago that a fetal catastrophe would happen today.

    科學家3年前預言今日會有ㄧ場胎兒的災難???!!!

    好恐怖ㄜ~~

    改成這樣會比好喔:

    1. (The) Scientists predicted 3 years ago that a fatal catastrophe would happen today.

    2008-04-11 19:54:21 補充:

    2. (The) Scientists predicted 3 years ago that a deadly catastrophe would happen today.

    科學家3年前預言今日會有ㄧ場致命的災難。

    嗯~~雖然致命,但沒那麼恐怖摟~~

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  • 1 decade ago

    1. His mother can't prevent him form chat on the Internet last night.

    2. Fiood in the mountains, and hurrecanes and typhoons is a cause

    to landslide.

    3. I think the commonest disasters in the last century are tornados,

    not volcsnoss.

    4. The scientist predict 3 years ago that a dead catastrophe would

    happen today.

    5. Catatrophe cause harm and have a impact on people life.

    6. You must to watching out to destructive tornadoes when you

    driving in Kansas during a storm.

    1.HIs mother can't prevent from chatting on the internet last night.

    ( prevent from 後面通常都是Ving的型式)

    2. Flood in the mountains. huurricanes and typhoons are cause to

    landslide.

    3. I think the most common disasters in the last century are tornados,

      not a volcanic eruption.

    4. The scientists predict that a deadly catastrophe would happen

    today just like three years ago.

    5. Catastrophe caused harm and had a deep impact on life of people.

    6. You must/ have to watch out for destructive tornados when

    driving in Kansas state (or Kansas city) during a storm.

    Source(s): myself
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  • 1 decade ago

    請幫我修正英文句子的錯誤(急............)

    1. His mother can't prevent him form chat on the Internet last night.

    His mother can't prevent him from chatting on the Internet last night.

    2. Fiood in the mountains, and hurrecanes and typhoons is a cause

    to landslide.

    The floods in the mountains, hurricanes and typhoons cause landslides.

    3. I think the commonest disasters in the last century are tornados,

    not volcsnoss.

    I think the commones disaster during the last centry is not volcsnoss(看不懂這是什麼字) but tornados.

    4. The scientist predict 3 years ago that a dead catastrophe would

    happen today.

    The scientist predicted 3 years ago that a dead catastrophe would happen today.

    5. Catatrophe cause harm and have a impact on people life.

    The catastrophe causes harm and has an impact on people's life.

    6. You must to watching out to destructive tornadoes when you

    driving in Kansas during a storm.

    You must watch out destructive tornadoes while you drive in Kansas during a storm.

    Source(s): 自己
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  • Sigma
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    1. His mother can't prevent him form chat on the Internet last night.

    His mother could not prevent him from chatting on the internet last night.

    2. Fiood in the mountains, and hurrecanes and typhoons is a cause

    to landslide.

    Mountain floods, together with hurricanes or typhoons, lead to landslides.

    3. I think the commonest disasters in the last century are tornados,

    not volcsnoss.

    I think the common diasters in the last century were from tornados, not from volcano eruptions.

    4. The scientist predict 3 years ago that a dead catastrophe would

    happen today.

    The scientist predicted 3 years ago that a fetal catastrophe would happen today.

    5. Catatrophe cause harm and have a impact on people life.

    Catastrophe causes great harm and has huge impact on people's life.

    6. You must to watching out to destructive tornadoes when you

    driving in Kansas during a storm.

    You must watch out for the destructive tornados if you are driving amid a storm in Kansas.

    Source(s): self
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