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Some american mentality movement discover,women can know teacher mean batter, and operate.man appear like to quarrel and take a risk.
Amaeican educate center discover about junior high school results and community ability, except language math,women's society work art, schoolmedia batter than men.

But in the study barrier and in the mood unstable aspect population proportion, the male student respectively is 73% and 76%, is higher than the female student by far 27% and 24%.

The male student accounts for the schoolwork not good student total the majority, moreover in which has 1/3 to think discontinues studies,
85% once have moved the murder thought, many people have attempted the narcotics, compares with on century 70's, male student's suicide rate also multiplied two.

In the physiological aspect, the usual man comparatively early dies,
Taiwan masculine life difference female five years old. Then, but also
some many high dangerous healthy custom,
like pulls out the tobaccohe, drinks, causes the high risk
disease, fatal, like heart blood vessel, stroke heart failure.

The research investigation demonstrated that, male student crime rate quite high, the male student is not easy to say the concern, is easy
the melancholia, the suicide rate high, also is easy to succeed

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