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My name is XXX, from Malaysia. I am an overseas Chinese. 18 years ago, my parents hoped me to study in Taiwan. Therefore, I came to Taiwan to finish my high school.

Then, I was a student of Department of Nursing in National Taipei College of Nursing, After graduation, I worked as a clinic nurse in Mennonite Christian Hospital in Hualien for two years.

At that time, I found that respiratory therapist is a different kind professional and maybe it would be more suitable for me, as a male nurse. Then, I applied for transfer.

Fortunately, I got the chance and passed the three months training. Besides, I passed the license exam in 2003, and had a further study in China Medical University. Because of the passion for the subject, I just can keep my work and my study.

This year, I will graduate and I hope to learn more. I make up my mind to apply for the graduate school. I hope I can have an opportunity to in pursuit of further and higher education.

請問 passed the license exam 換成got the license會比較好嗎?

還有什麼其他需要被修改的地方呢

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    My name is XXX. An oversea Chinese, I come from Malaysia. To live up to my parents’ expectation, I choose to study in Taiwan. Graduated from Department of Nursing in National Taipei College of Nursing, I had worked as a clinic nurse in Mennonite Christian Hospital in Hualien for two years. During that period of time, I found that different from a male nurse, being a respiratory therapist would fit me better. Therefore, I, determined, applied to transfer to another school and had an opportunity to take the three-month training. Moreover, in 2003, I got the license and had a further education in China Medical University. For my passion for the subject, I do my best to look after my job and my learning. A would-be graduate and eager to learn, I, planning to apply for a graduate school, hope for higher education.

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