Critique Poem: JiJi Arrows of Love?

What My I? A novice in game of love? A flying bird or dove? Jiji is hunting my heart I am falling apart Arrows of love thrown at me I run but I fall on my knee JiJi hear my sigh and plea I want to sing I want to be free Ouch your last arrow has landed I am in the field of love stranded Jiji come closer... show more What My I?
A novice in game of love?
A flying bird or dove?
Jiji is hunting my heart
I am falling apart
Arrows of love thrown at me
I run but I fall on my knee
JiJi hear my sigh and plea
I want to sing
I want to be free
Ouch your last arrow has landed
I am in the field of love stranded
Jiji come closer and you can see
What love have done to me?
I am helpless and what can I do?
Only in your loving arms I surrender
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