Simon asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我~修改~”中翻英”的作文,,謝謝

偶爾會聽到別人講:危機就是轉機。當自己遇到瓶頸、受阻或挫折的時候,思考與心態常常會影響一個人的發展,把檢討失敗或是挫折的因素,轉換成有效的成長動力,會比停留在抱怨而無法向前進來得好,雖然用正面的思考不會讓眼前的問題馬上消失,但經過思考後所產生的動力,會幫助自己解決問題,也會讓自己修正錯誤,朝著正確的方向前進的,在近代的政治裡、商場上,或是近世紀的戰爭與偉人記錄中,很多地方可以看到這些人能夠成功,都以正面的思考,幫助著他們實踐理想與邁向目標。現在社會的生活環境變化很快,影響生活的因素比以前來的多,要讓自己試著多「正面思考」,揮別失敗與挫折,這樣的生活會比較充實,比較有希望與目標。

Sometimes will hear the person speaking: The crisis is a turning point.

When the person meets bottleneck get difficulty and frustrate. Thinking and mindset usually influence a person's development. Let to examine the factor of the failure or frustrate, become a growth motive. Compare to stay around to complain and can't come in forward well. Although “looking on the bright side” more often, your problems may not all go away. But will produce advanced motive after correct thinking. Will help oneself to work out the problem. Let oneself correction mistake and dynasty the correct square make headway. Recently political of the dynasty inside, and business situation. Or war and great man record to win. "Looking on the bright side" helped them to head into success. Help them to practice ideal and head into a target. The living environment in nowadays changes very fast. It's more than past to influence a living factor. Want to let oneself try much " looking on the bright side ". Could wave a farewell failure and frustrate. Will make the life been more substantial, compare hope and target.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    以下是我的修改:

    Sometimes we will hear others say: a crisis is a turning point. When facing bottleneck、blockage or frustration, these will affect our consideration and mind, even development.

    It's better to transform an effective growing power than complaint. Even though the current problems won't disappear immediately, with the energy after thinking, we can help us to solve problems and rectify mistakes, go forward with the right direction.

    We can see many successful person uses positive consideration helping themselves to achieve their idealities and goals no matter in modern politics、business、contemporary wars or records of great person.

    In modern society, the environment changes quickly, bringing much more influences of life than past. We have to use positive thinking, cross off failure and frustration, then we will lead a more abundant life of hope and goal.

    建議 :

    你好~我大致上看過你所寫的文章,我覺得文法錯誤頗多,不知道你有沒有發現,你的主詞都不見了,但主詞不見了,也不能直接用動詞來開頭喔,英文不是中文,不能直接翻,英文是有文法的喔~

    還有單字的詞性也有些許錯誤

    所以我從新寫了一篇翻譯及從新幫你斷句,希望可以通順一點

    希望我的回答對你有幫助~ 謝謝~

    Source(s): myself
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