Anonymous
Anonymous asked in Entertainment & MusicPolls & Surveys · 1 decade ago

What do you think of this poem I just wrote...?

...in order to either irritate you, mesmerize you, or make you nauseous...?

(You must feel one of those "3" things (or more) after reading this poem with which I am writing totally improv'd from my "tough guy feelings..."

...oh kay?!? So feel free to answer "whatever..." I can handle it...did I mention that I am a tough guy? All righty then...

Right Time, Wrong Place...

Have you ever felt more suited

To a past or future page...

Even knowing THIS is the past or future

For some misbegotten or tomorrow age...

Knightly genes passed down to a time'

When your skills are put to waste

For all exploration and adventure

Is now a repeat...and done in haste

All the wealth presently shining

Does nothing to make your day

You just need new lands to discover

And a Princess to save...

(Anybody ever felt like that?)

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  • 1 decade ago
    Best Answer

    I am weak in the knees....... Save me, I am your Princess.

  • 1 decade ago

    Oh i think it's so sweet and loved it so much ..I loved your answer last nite to about the white and orange light; your to sweet [smile].I have felt like this to but have a prince to save me . And not the Dark Prince lol .Your poem is nice too! Cya Sherry

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Very good words. I like it a lot.

    I know of a place you've never seen if you're searching. And a chick to save. Good poem Sweetness.

  • 1 decade ago

    It's a lovely poem,just fine

    I can relate as a past warrior (in my mind)

    but I have enough trouble rescuing myself these days,never mind the princess who should just s**k it up so to speak and rescue herself

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I read that same poem in Emily Dickinson's last book on poetry.

    Wonder says you stole her work!

  • 1 decade ago

    Not exactly, but I know you do. And you managed to encapsulate it. A difficult task where deep feelings are involved.

  • 1 decade ago

    Yes, I feel this way presently. Well said.

  • Tigger
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    Yeppers, wrong time wrong place many, many times in my life.

    Pocket I hate to disappoint you but it didn't do any of those things for me.

  • 1 decade ago

    Work on it some more but good potential.

  • ?
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    Two words:

    Quad Laser.

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