What do you think of this poem I just wrote...?

...in order to either irritate you, mesmerize you, or make you nauseous...? (You must feel one of those "3" things (or more) after reading this poem with which I am writing totally improv'd from my "tough guy feelings..." ...oh kay?!? So feel free to answer... show more ...in order to either irritate you, mesmerize you, or make you nauseous...?

(You must feel one of those "3" things (or more) after reading this poem with which I am writing totally improv'd from my "tough guy feelings..."

...oh kay?!? So feel free to answer "whatever..." I can handle it...did I mention that I am a tough guy? All righty then...

Right Time, Wrong Place...

Have you ever felt more suited
To a past or future page...
Even knowing THIS is the past or future
For some misbegotten or tomorrow age...

Knightly genes passed down to a time'
When your skills are put to waste
For all exploration and adventure
Is now a repeat...and done in haste

All the wealth presently shining
Does nothing to make your day
You just need new lands to discover
And a Princess to save...


(Anybody ever felt like that?)
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