姿君 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

(20點)外文系面試 幫我將英文自傳濃縮成英文自我介紹!

請幫我將以下的英文自傳濃縮成

1.一分鐘英文自我介紹

2.三分鐘英文自我介紹

謝謝!

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Family background

I am 000, Angela is my English name, at the age of eighteen. I am a third-year student majoring in the General Department of00Senior High School. There are six people in my family and I am the last child of four. My father is a construction worker and my mother is a vendor in the traditional market. My older brother is studying in the Institute of Technology and my sisters are working right now. We get along with each other very well. My parents are open-minded and considerate and they sometimes offer us the timely suggestions. Since I was a junior high school student, I took charge of the housework mostly because my parents started working off city, and my brother and sisters studied far away from hometown. I sometimes help Mom with selling in the traditional market. I have learned how to communicate with people from the experience and have known the hardship of making a living. Growing up in such circumstances, I gradually become an individual and responsible person.

Update:

I not only study very hard but also am active in the extracurricular activities at school because I believe that I ought to strike a balance between academic schoolwork and extracurricular activities to be a well-cultivated student.

Update 2:

Therefore, I was chosen as the monitor of my class and serves section chief. I felt proud to have the chance to help my classmates. In the first year of senior year, I ever served as a master of ceremony.

Update 3:

It made me not to be afraid of facing the formal situation and also reinforce my confidence. Besides, I won the third prize in short essay contest of Grade Three of Senior High School nationwide.

Update 4:

I also got the certificate of English proficiency Level 4 in Education Association of Commerce and Vocation. Now I am the coordinator of activities in Student Council at school.

Update 5:

I enjoy reading since childhood. I like to stay in the library in my free time. Reading is my favorite interest. The book I like most is “The Kite Runner” by Khaled Hosseini.

Update 6:

It makes me broaden my vision to see the different worlds, lives and the infinite possibilities. In addition, I like singing, listening to music and jogging. I ever joined in the Marathon Race to work out my body.

Update 7:

My great enthusiasm for English was developed since senior high school. I have been thinking that I did not learn English well in the beginning so I am afraid of learning it. But my English teacher told me,“It is never too late to learn English if you really want to learn it well.”

Update 8:

Hence, I have decided to work hard on it and English teacher also instructed me the basic English. I am determined to be an English teacher or journalist. My interest in English is everlasting.

Update 9:

If I have any opportunity to enter the Foreign Department of Your School, I am going to focus on English writing and grammar. I believe I will modify my weakness and get a very good grade in the future four years under the professor’instruction.

Update 10:

Thomas Edison goes, “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.” I will keep going further to make my dream come true.

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  • inch
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago
    Best Answer

    三分鐘版本

    I am 000, Angela as the English name, eighteen years. There are three brothers and sisters above me in my family. Though my parents are doing traditional jobs, they are very open-minded to their children. Therefore, we grew up at liberty and have the ideas of our own.

    At school, not only do I study hard but also I actively participate in extracurricular activities. I was chosen as a class monitor, serves section chief, and even a master of ceremony. All of these made me brave to face both formal occasions and emergent situations. Also, I am the coordinator of activities in Student Council at school now.

    Beside school, I enjoy reading in my leisure time. I believe that reading can broaden my vision and I can see different worlds through books. Most important, reading English materials helps me improve my English ability. Since I decided to be an English teacher, I have to study it as hard as I can.

    If I am luckily chosen by your department, I am going to focus on writing and grammar. I believe I will grow up and learn lots about English in the future.

    As Thomas Edison said, “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.” I will do my best to make my dream comes true.

    一分鐘版本

    I am 000, Angela as the English name, eighteen years.

    At school, not only do I study hard but also I actively participate in extracurricular activities. I was chosen as a class monitor, serves section chief, and even a master of ceremony. All of these made me brave to face both formal occasions and emergent situations. Beside school, I enjoy reading in my leisure time. I believe that reading English materials helps me improve my English ability. Since I decided to be an English teacher, I have to study it as hard as I can.

    If I am luckily chosen by your department, I am going to focus on writing and grammar. I believe I will grow up and learn lots about English in the future.

    Source(s): 自己念過了 時間差不多^^ 希望對你有幫助
  • 1 decade ago

    你可以去下面那個部落格看看,他上面有發表很多自傳翻譯的文章和相關資料,還有許多英文學習相關,對你的翻譯應該滿有幫助!還有一些面談面試的要領,你都可以參考喔!

    你若有問題也可以發問或是留言! (也有在幫人校對文章)

    部落格網址: http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/supercanada2007/

    Source(s): 很實用的求職 翻譯部落格
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