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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

幫改一下150字的英文短文~急 20點

Movie has been around for more than a century, from silent to sound and from black-and-white to color. It always plays an important role in our life. Movie is an individual motion picture that entertains or educates people. Commercial movies make you laugh and art movie make you think. Movie and culture are related to each other. Movie is created by cultures and it shows cultures, and then also affects them. Different countries have different styles of movies. They all have special characteristics and tall different stories. In movies, you can be a totally different person, you can fly, you can go back to the past, and you even have a super power. If you want to true into a monster with lots of fur on you face, it’s possible. Anything you can’t do in the real life, movie can help your dreams come true. Use your imaginations and get ready to this fantastic world.

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幫改一下文法~或換成更好的字~謝謝

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    1 decade ago
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    Movies have been around for more than one century, from pantomime to sound and from black-and-white to full-color. They always play an important role in our life. A movie includes individual motion pictures that entertains or educates people. Commercial movies make you laugh and art movie make you think. Movie and culture are related to each other. Movie is created by cultures and it shows cultures, and then also affects them. Different countries have different movie styles. They all have special characteristics and tell different stories. In movies, you can be a totally different person, you can fly, you can go back to the past, and you even have a super power. If you want to true into a monster with lots of fur on your face, it’s possible. Movies can help your dreams, which you can not accomplish in your real life, come true. Please use your imaginations and get ready to this fantastic world.

    基本上你寫的已經相當不錯了,我所能修改的相對十分有限

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  • 1 decade ago

    Movies have been around for more than a century, from silent to sound and from black-and-white to color. They always play an important role in our lives. Movies are individual motion pictures that entertain or educate people. Commercial movies make you laugh and art movies make you think. Movies and culture are related to each other. Movies are created by cultures and they show cultures, and then also affect them. Different countries have different styles of movies. They all have special characteristics and tell different stories. In movies, you can be a totally different person- you can fly, you can go back to the past, and you can even have a super power. If you want to turn into a monster with lots of fur on you face, it’s possible. Anything you can’t do in real life, movies can help your dreams come true. Use your imaginations and get ready for this fantastic world.

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    i have just change some grammar error and it seems fine to me.

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