李先生 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

英文!!!20點...限今天!!

藍色是我的答案,請先進看我答案對不對...

請指出以下句子的錯誤

1. D.McGregor,one of the earliest and most prominent advo cates of the moderm

approaches to management,proposed two concepts of worker motivation.

→D.McGregor ”one of the earliest and most prominent advo cates of the moderm

approaches to management”proposed two concepts of worker motivation.

2. Chang et al.【200 lb 】reported that the of Brungraber Mark II is the sma

【0.07 】among the four slip measurement devices compared.

→ Chang et al. ( 200 lb ) reported that the of Brungraber Mark II is the sma

( 0.07 ) among the four slip measurement devices compared.

3.『Specific written consent』means a written authorization containing the name and

signature of the employse authorizing the release of the medical information to the

public.

→ ”Specific written consent”means a written authorization containing the name and

signature of the employse authorizing the release of the medical information to the

public.

4. The rating procedure developed by M. E. Mendall is known as “objective rating”。

→ The rating procedure developed by M.E. Mendall is known as “objective rating.”

5. The means of the participants’age, length of tenure, and working hour per week were

22.55 years、13.12 months、and 37.86 hours.

→ The means of the participants’age, length of tenure, and working hour per week were

22.55 years,13.12 months,and 37.86 hours.

6. A two/tailed test was performed to examine the difference between the two groups.

→ A two-tailed test was performed to examine the difference between the two groups.

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  • jinlin
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    1 decade ago
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    有些好像是文法錯誤, 拼音錯誤歐Try this....

    1. D.McGregor,one of the earliest and most prominent advo cates of

    the moderm approaches to management,proposed two concepts of

    worker motivation.

    →D.McGregor ”one of the earliest and most prominent advo cates of

    the moderm approaches to management”proposed two concepts of

    worker motivation.(這是你的)

    D.McGregor, one of the earliest and most prominent advocates (不是

    advo cates) of the modern (不是 moderm ) approaches to management,

    proposed two concepts of worker motivation.

    2. Chang et al.【200 lb 】reported that the of Brungraber Mark II is the

    sma【0.07 】among the four slip measurement devices compared.

    → Chang et al. ( 200 lb ) reported that the of Brungraber Mark II is the

    sma ( 0.07 ) among the four slip measurement devices compared.(這是

    你的)

    Chang et al. (200 lb.) , reported that the (of 要去掉)Brungraber Mark II,

    is the [sma( 0.07 ) 是錯的] smallest ( 0.07 )among the four ( slip錯的 )

    ship measurement devices compared.

    3.『Specific written consent』means a written authorization containing

    the name and signature of the employse authorizing the release of the

    medical information to the public.

    → ”Specific written consent”means a written authorization containing

    the name and signature of the ( employse錯的 ) employees authorizing

    the release of the medical information to the public.

    4. The rating procedure developed by M. E. Mendall is known as

    “objective rating”。

    → The rating procedure developed by M.E. Mendall ( is ) was known as

    “objective rating.”

    developed過去式---was

    5. The means of the participants’age, length of tenure, and working

    hour per week were

    22.55 years、13.12 months、and 37.86 hours.

    → The (means) measures of the participants ' age, length of tenure,

    and working hour per week were 22.55 years,13.12 months and

    37.86 hours.

    6. A two/tailed test was performed to examine the difference between

    the two groups.

    → A two-tailed test was performed to examine the difference between

    the two groups. 沒錯

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  • 1 decade ago

    1. D.McGregor,one of the earliest and most prominent advo cates of the moderm,approaches to management,proposed two concepts of worker motivation.

    應該改成 D.McGregor,one of the earliest and most prominent advocates of the moderm,approaches to management,proposed two concepts of worker motivation.

    是插入句 補充說明的非限定用法

    3.『Specific written consent』means a written authorization containing the name and signature of the employse authorizing the release of the medical information to the public.

    應該成 “Specific written consent”

        一個是朝上;一個是朝下

    4. The rating procedure developed by M. E. Mendall is known as “objective rating”。

    應改成 The rating procedure developed by M. E. Mendall is known as “objective rating”.

    句號應放在引號後面

    其他應該沒什麼問題了

    Source(s): 自己
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