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Anonymous asked in Entertainment & MusicMusicRap and Hip-Hop · 1 decade ago

"7 Deadly Sins" an original RHH Section piece?

Original piece written to the acoustic version of Thugz Mansion by Tupac ft. Nas. by myself, Ant, Biscuits, Makaveli, & Ms Brown. incorporating the 7 deadly sins into a song, instrumental below if u'd like to listen to it as u read..any feedback welcome

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q9qwTxgdTWU

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Thoughts of another woman in his head, in his bed

Neglegence towards the queen he wed, no love was shed

Threats of leaving her were never met, and so he crept

Stabs in her back she fret, but all remained was a man's regrets

Lust had got him weepin, he sinkin in the deep end

His own tears, affairs on the horizon he was seeking

Nasty dreams, lethal images handily imposed

But as predicted, out of the concrete would come a rose

And so, he chose to propose not to cheat again

To calm him down, he opted to go see a friend

They meet, take a seat, start talkin and eat

He sees his friends wife cookin, dressed down all neat from head to

feet

He starts braggin on his wife, tries to compare and compete

Green with envy, of how strong their relationship is now

Jealous of their wealth, he arose fast and ran to his friends spouse

Then ripped tha necklace out of her blouse and stormed out of the

house

White pearls cover the palm of his hand, white, green

Colors that he seeing, not believing this is his reason for being

A thief, liar, adulterer, choosing many women over her

The lust and envy is no longer a blur

Eyes wide shut, gluttony's one of the two bad feelings in his gut,

The other piercing, now he wishing, praying on his knees but for what

Wishes he aint do it, realizes that he was stupid

He knows that if he pursue it maybe he can get through it

Wants to stop, but doesn't know if he's strong enough

And the greed consumes himself, now he's makin stories up

Attempts to explain, that all his sin causes him pain

Taking what's not his, and as he runs out into the rain

Water fallin from the skies, just water fallin from his eyes,

A now blurry vision denies the path to his demise

But what he lost, friendly relations, and thoughtful conversations

Damaged reputations, somber mood; a heart pacin

I'm the reason that you run the streets and pack heat

You never back down from beef and don't let these cats eat

Cause you know their all sweet and I consent your conceit

So you can rise above all others and not see defeat

With me you think you're the epitome

Of all men and you're too proud to get rid of me

And I make you cynical

By boosting your confidence and ego you think you're the pinnacle

Ridiculed inside the wrath of the past and aftermath

Attack ex-lovers, axed and wrapped in cover

Jealousy worn on his sleeve, and envy somewhere beneath

The the greed, the need to thieve, He found relief

Murderin her thoughts, a legal genocide

Propped on that project bench, where his vengeance died

No pearls were returned, just a heaven ready kid

Regrets all he did, what he hid, Seven Deadly Sins

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    good ish

  • 4 years ago

    4 and 6

  • Temari
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    I loved that you did this piece. I am inspired to write once again. I appreciate the significance of the rose that grew threw the concrete, reference. Nice touch.

    The third stanza was the best for me. Solid lines and visuals.

    All in all a great effort.

    Temari

  • 1 decade ago

    I liked parts of the second and the third was pretty damn good. Overall it kept to the topic so you've got something going there. That third one is pretty potent and I also like the last few lines of the first.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    i loved it. (for your ref. there is a typo 5th line from the bottom)

    "The the greed, the need to thieve, He found relief"

    Well done excellent Job

  • This is seriously good. We've got a lot of talent round here.

    *feels all proud of everyone* ;)

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    you wrote that?!(rhetorical)

    That ish is good hnic, I seriously think you should continue writing and get on youtube and spit, then grow dreds and get tatoos lol.... ( I joke about the dreds and tat comment)

  • That was pretty good... Maybe I can get on the next one. *Giggles*

  • 1 decade ago

    Wow that was amazing! Nice work.

  • Anonymous
    5 years ago

    34fg

  • 1 decade ago

    *nods head* I feel this one!!!

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