Please Help me with My Chinese Work?

This is a monologue i'm giving in class: W o zhu zai mixigen daxue de sushe zhu le qi ge yue le. Wo juede wo de fangjian hen xiao. Ta li fang bu xia yi ge shafa huozhe liang ba yizi. Zaishuo, wo de shuidianfei hen gui. Suoyi, xia ge xueqi wo yao fangzu yi tao gongyu. Cong Wwo de gongyu dao mixigen... show more This is a monologue i'm giving in class:

W o zhu zai mixigen daxue de sushe zhu le qi ge yue le. Wo juede wo de fangjian hen xiao. Ta li fang bu xia yi ge shafa huozhe liang ba yizi. Zaishuo, wo de shuidianfei hen gui. Suoyi, xia ge xueqi wo yao fangzu yi tao gongyu. Cong Wwo de gongyu dao mixigen daxue de tushuguan zou lu wu fenzhong. Danshi, gongyu de shuidianfei bi sushi de shuidianfei gui. Keshi, wo juede daxiao hen zhongyao. Suoyi, yue da yue hao!

These are translations i'm doing:

1. Please stop saying that. It makes me feel very bad.-->qing shuo bu qu. ta duo nanshou.

2. I have not had a bath for 3 days (already.) It's very uncomfortable.-->wo san tian meiyou xizao le. ta duo nanshou.

3. I haven't been to school for a week.-->wo yi ge xingqi meiyou shang xuexiao

4. Of course I am afraid of drowning. But I am willing to go swimming together with you.--> dangran wo pa yansi le. danshi, wo yuanyi yiqi ni you yong
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