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誰會修改英文作文??

Argentina Leader Faults U.S. on Inquiry

December 14, 2007

Since this affair happen in U.S., it should been stringently handle. According to the article, we do not know if it is true that Mrs. Kirchner did know or not. It begins at August the fourth, one whose name was Mr.Antonini had carried a bag of money who flight from Florida through Venezuela and Argentina. But later, one of Argentina’s official founds out. So this is probably one of the reasons that why these four men do caught by American officials.

It all started from Mr. Antonini which begins on August that when Mr. Antonini had bought the presidential campaign from Florida through Argentina. One of Argentina’s official said that it is not against the law to bring the campaign to the president, but not secretly. Back from today, the four men that had being caught is related to the case within Mr. Antonini but also Argentina and Venezuela. The four men, one of them is called Franklin Duran that had told Mr. Antonini to bring the cascade for election needs.

So two days, after, when Mrs.Kirchner had been elected, the American officials had caught the four men in the United States. It was the night where the officials saw them acting as foreign agents without notification, then they have been caught on Wednesday. In Miami the federal court also point out in the past few months there is also a men is going to plotted then been caught, which is Mr.Antonini’s case. Afterwards, the money had been send to the federal court for being research, and they all have been caught.

Alexei Barrionuevo.”Argentina Leader Faults U.S. on Inquiry” New York Times 14, December.2007

這是一篇我打的英文作文,請問誰可以幫我修一下??

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這只是一個 summary,文章是

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  • River
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    Argentina Leader Faults U.S. on Inquiry

    December 14, 2007

    Since this affair happened in U.S. , it should have been stringently handled. According to the article, we do not know if it is true that Mrs. Kirchner knew or not. It began on August the fourth, one whose name was Mr. Antonini had carried a bag of money who flew from Florida through Venezuela and Argentina . But later, one of Argentina ’s official found out. So this is probably one of the reasons that (去掉) why these four men were caught by American officials.

    It all started from Mr. Antonini which began on August that when Mr. Antonini had brought the presidential campaign from Florida through Argentina . One of Argentina ’s official said that it was not against the law to bring the campaign to the president, but not secretly. Back from today, the four men that had been caught is related to the case within Mr. Antonini but also Argentina and Venezuela . The four men, one of them was called Franklin Duran that had told Mr. Antonini to bring the cascade for election needs.

    So two days after, when Mrs. Kirchner was elected, the American officials caught the four men in the United States . It was the night when the officials saw them act as foreign agents without notification, then they were caught on Wednesday. In Miami the federal court also points out in the past few months there was also a men who was going to plot and then was caught, which was Mr.Antonini’s case. Afterwards, the money had been sent to the federal court for being researched, and they were all caught.

    Alexei Barrionuevo,” Argentina Leader Faults U.S. on Inquiry”, New York Times 14, December.2007.

    【錯誤更正說明】

    主要是『時式(tense)的錯誤』與部分子句與連接詞的問題。

    如第一句:Since this affair happened in U.S. , it should have been stringently handled.

    【更正】這是新聞報導,基本時間應該是『過去式』(happened) 與對過去事情的推測 (should have been handled)

    Source(s): River + teacher
  • 1 decade ago

    通常 in U.S. 會說成 in the U.S.

  • 1 decade ago

    幫你改到的地方我用()框起來...可以在找人看看

    Argentina Leader Faults U.S. on Inquiry

    December 14, 2007

    Since this affair happen in (the) U.S., it should been stringently handle(請住意handle什麼?). According to the article(什麼article), we do not know if it is true (or not) that Mrs. Kirchner (know). It begins at August fourth (年份), one whose name was Mr.Antonini had carried a bag of money (刪除) flight from Florida through Venezuela and Argentina, (but 前面不能用".") but later one of Argentina’s official founds out. So this is probably one of the reasons that why these four men do (get) arrested by American officials.

    It all started from Mr. Antonini which begins on August that when Mr. Antonini had bought the presidential campaign from Florida through Argentina. One of Argentina’s official said that it is not against the law to bring the campaign to the president, but not secretly. Back from today(是yesterday?), the four men that had being arrest is related to the case within Mr. Antonini but also Argentina and Venezuela (這段不對歐Argentina and Venezuela是個地名). The four men, one of them is called Franklin Duran that had told Mr. Antonini to bring the cascade for ( the ) election needs.

    (Two) days (later) when Mrs.Kirchner had been elected, the American officials had arrest the four men in the United States. It was the night where the officials saw them acting as foreign agents without notification, then they(got) arrest on Wednesday. In Miami the federal court also point out in the past few months there is also a men (was) going to plotted then been caught, which is Mr.Antonini’s case. Afterwards, the money had been send to the federal court for being research, and they all have been (arrest).

    Alexei Barrionuevo.”Argentina Leader Faults U.S. on Inquiry” New York Times 14, December.2007

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